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Restoration

Sebastian Teacutter on Jan 7, 2009
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A broken heart that longs to be restored.

Be my life
Be my all
Be my guide
And hear my call
Be my truth
Be my light
Guide me through this dark cold night
I want to see you
I want to feel you
Erase the past I can’t undo
Embrace me now and hold me close
For you are the one I need the most

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  • Kim Buck on Jan 8, 2009

    I really like this and I can very well relate even though you and I are years apart in age.

  • sarah belle on Jan 8, 2009

    hey sweetie! that was good. :) i love your poetry.

  • payge on Jan 8, 2009

    Very nice and can relate more then you think about now….Welcome to the triond community….

  • Tusaani on Jan 9, 2009

    Wow, it’s sweet and beautiful!

  • Liane Schmidt on Jan 9, 2009

    This is LOVE’S PASSION – emotions flowing like a powerful waterfall, full of love, hope, yearning and life – I love it.

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Jimmy Smith on Jan 10, 2009

    very nice great poem

  • Sandra Tapia on Jan 28, 2009

    Are you sure you are only forteen. There is so much depth and experience to this piece. Your writing is beyond your years. I’m sure there is no need to say “keep it up!”, you have the heart of a true writer.

  • Gayle Hamilton on Feb 6, 2009

    This is amazing your desire to be one with God shines through
    as you desire to hear and obey his voice.

    Heed the call,
    God Bless

    Gayle

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