The power of sorcery and love.

She emerges from nihility
Gazes forcefully over the prey
With tenacious hands
She clutches the ruff
Divulging her desires
With delicate fingers
Caresses playfully
At moisted lips
Paralyzing its victim
The enticement process
Complete

The embrace initiates
Eyes filled with animalistic fervor
Secure these seatbelts
Ascend into space
Soar into latitudes of euphoria
Glide across the million stars
Clinging on passionately

Her eyes shuts sluggishly
With total reluctance
The predator bids her farewell
Twilight and infernal fogs
Engulfs the seductress
Vanishing her into obscurity

He plummets down
From the cosmic space
From the unworldly
From a sorcerous dream

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Comments (16)
  • zen on Nov 11, 2007

    wao! that blew me off!

  • teh on Nov 11, 2007

    Stunning!! How long did you took to compose it??

  • john on Nov 11, 2007

    it’s intriguing

  • Larry on Nov 11, 2007

    Very interesting.

  • DD on Nov 11, 2007

    NICE!

  • UL on Nov 11, 2007

    not bad eh! i cant even think of such words in my mind LOL good job =D

  • matt on Nov 11, 2007

    wide range of vocab. splendid expression. good job man

  • hsienny on Nov 11, 2007

    lol. u could be my literature pal. nice poem :) so dark and full of mystery. making alternating rhymes would be cool too!

  • Phantasmic on Nov 11, 2007

    I don’t know, poems that rhyme sound like nursery rhymes. Lol~

  • kame on Nov 11, 2007

    lol
    nice. omg my vocab not tt strong like yours la
    to say tt im a pure lit student is sucha shame
    lol

  • annette on Nov 12, 2007

    interesting poem.. I could feel the power of sorcery and love from that poem

  • asd on Nov 12, 2007

    hey you got a wide range of vocab !

  • xsomebodyx on Nov 12, 2007

    wow that’s some good vocab.
    Kudos to you sia.

  • weiming on Nov 12, 2007

    perfect command of the language. totally remarkable.

  • YaNz on Nov 12, 2007

    It’s quite okay actually this poem of yours… but the thing is, you don’t really have to use complex words to write a poem of deep meaning.. just use simple words will do… this is to make your poem more enjoyable for readers who don’t have as wide as a vocabulary… just my suggestion that’s all…

  • B|ahx3` on Nov 14, 2007

    ZAI ! danny all the way !

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