A Poem about space.

Space,it is big and mystic,
It holds wonder and adventure for all.
Astronauts explore it their whole lives,
but still to no extent we know little.

Space,it’s vast size amazes us,
we dream to explore and soar
right through space!
But ten realize we are only
a spec of dust on the universe’s face.

All the time in the world,
and to what extent?
it wil take years to explore and
map the whole universe.

So we should stay here,on Earth
and just admire space,
a deep depp wonder where
we would dream about our adventures.

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  • lolz on Jul 17, 2009

    that was so bad it was funny. first of all, your grammar is revolting. second, try not to use the same words over and over again. like space. even though that’s what the whole poem is about. third, spelling. 4th, the whole idea. you say itll take years to map the universe? try BILLIONS of years. and you astronauts spend their whole life exploring space? most go up for a few days and never go back…

  • Kakraba Afful on Mar 20, 2010

    awesome

  • David Johnson on Apr 5, 2010

    I liked the poem.

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