The Last Cut is the Deepest

nobert soloria bermosa on Sep 1, 2008

Tags: absolute happiness, cut, death, hurt, Journey, Life, love, The Last Cut is the Deepest

In this journey of life where nothing is certain but death…

We’re always in search
for the most elusive
thing on earth,
- absolute happiness.

That’s why, in our lives
we have to settle down
With the thought that
we finally found the one
The best and the ultimate
realization of our dreams,
Our real and everlasting
LOVE

In one of Rod Stewart’s songs
he once said to the world
“The first cut is the deepest”
And I thought it was so
because it felt the same
the first time I did

The second cut was fairly deep
so with the second, the third,
and so on and so forth…

I thought that each time
I am cut, the lesser
the pain it would inflict
but I was wrong

I came to realized that
I only came to think
that they were not as
painful as the first ‘coz
I’m already used to it

Then the last cut came
it came without a warning
It’s the most painful,
the pain is unbearable
But then again,
I must go on living
no matter how much
I am hurt.

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Natalie-Jane on Sep 1, 2008
wow! that is really deep and meaningful, well written too xxx
Gerlaine on Sep 1, 2008
I don’t see you on authspot a lot, but I like you here. ~G
swapna on Sep 1, 2008
very nice….
Unofre Pili on Sep 1, 2008
Great innovation bro,
Juancav on Sep 1, 2008
Very deep thought,feeling and sorrow.
Lauren Axelrod on Sep 1, 2008
This is amazing Norbert. I like this side of you.
Judy Sheldon on Sep 1, 2008
Nobert, you’ve come full circle, and I hope you continue to rotate as you do well in all aspects of writing. Wonderful job. Thanks.

Take care and God bless.
Psiplex on Sep 1, 2008
Very nice way of portraying your journey. The pain and sorrow felt are reflections of how we ‘thought’ events should be for ourselves. We should also realize that all internal, non-physical suffering is due to thoughts which can be eradicated. Acceptance, forgiveness and love play important roles in relieving suffering.

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Moses Ingram on Sep 1, 2008
very nice.
Karen N on Sep 1, 2008
I really like this one, thanks.
Ruby Hawk on Sep 1, 2008
When we begin to realize our journey through life is making choices that we are responsible for then we are truly adult.
william rodriguez II on Sep 1, 2008
well written verse.thanks.
mae on Sep 1, 2008
another terrific poem of yours. thanks.
Eden Emersen on Sep 1, 2008
I feel your pain.
Crissleigh on Sep 1, 2008
Norbert this is very beautiful and so very true . Out standing job my friend .
PR Mace on Sep 1, 2008
I love this side of you. My you be blessed with happiness, my friend in writing.
Darlene McFarlane on Sep 1, 2008
This is a very interesting poem. I really like this one. Gives me something to think about.
Mark Gordon Brown on Sep 1, 2008
good poem.. music playing in my head
B Nelson on Sep 1, 2008
norbert – that was great, thanks!
Leo Reyes on Sep 2, 2008
Great piece you have. Authspot needs more of this kind.
R.B. Parsley on Sep 2, 2008
Nobert,
This\’s great!!!! Your rockin\’ now buddy!!!!!! I could feel the pain in your words. Keep it up! Your doing fantastic!

Randy
Josey on Sep 2, 2008
I feel your pain too.
Blaise on Sep 7, 2008
everyone has hidden cut/s where lies wisdom as we aged…
nobert soloria bermosa on Sep 19, 2008
thank you very much for reading and commenting, i appreciate it very much more than words can say!

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