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Mrs M on Mar 28, 2009

The…….

The touch

The feel

The sensation

Reaching each inch of my body

Caressing me ever so lightly

Yet effecting me greatly

Sometimes the pounding against me is hard

Other times I request slow

Sometimes it wakes me up

Other times it can put me straight to sleep

Relaxing my muscles

Making me feel like I have lost all muscle control and just need to lay down

It makes me feel oh so good either way

Sometimes I need it to be hot

Making my body temperature rise just slightly

Other times I need it to be quick and cool

Out and in

No time to take it slow and enjoy it fully

Ya gotta love taking a shower!

Especially when you have a fancy shower that you can choose how the water falls!

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Comments (7)

rajeev ibhargava on Mar 28, 2009
i really enjoyed this poem. i really got into it and then came the twist in the end. absolutely brilliant!
Kate Smedley on Mar 28, 2009
I can’t get the ‘Liked It’ button to work but I like it a lot, you had me fooled all the way!
Ben donovan on Mar 28, 2009
That was awesome what a great way to capture the reader and pull them in to your world.
Darla Cooke on Mar 28, 2009
Great poem! I was expecting the ending to it.
S A JOHNSON on Mar 28, 2009
Showers are awesome, they have to be one my favorite things to do.
Fresh Writing on Mar 31, 2009
Excellent poem; hah! Had a twist to the end…:D

Loved it-thanks for sharing.

-Fresh Writing
Parmod on Dec 13, 2009
Awsome poem!!

Hi there!