Some relationships are better when kept secret sometimes.

It’s hard,
it’s happy,
It’s sad
that’s the picture
of our love
for every moment
that we steal
we’re so happy
our world is filled
with happiness
joy overflowing
hoping always
it doesn’t
have to end
but we need to
accept reality
our relationship
must keep secret
because our situation
is unique
I’m free
you’re free
but somehow
we have to keep
it this way
ahhh….love
it’s really
fascinating
it’s truly
mysterious.

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  • Unofre Pili on Jun 1, 2008

    Nice piece buddy. Reminds me of the poetry of E.E. Cummings.

  • valli on Jun 1, 2008

    Nice poetry.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 1, 2008

    LOve makes the world go round.

  • tracy sardelli on Jun 1, 2008

    very true, love is indeed a mystery.

  • salvatore on Jun 1, 2008

    great poem buddy, thanks for sharing.

  • deepbluesea on Jun 1, 2008

    Wonderfully written!

  • Anna Ski on Jun 1, 2008

    The more mysterious the more intriguing just like your poem. I like.

  • Lucy Lockett on Jun 1, 2008

    Sounds amorous and seductive!

  • Shames on Jun 2, 2008

    Lovely poem!

  • Darlene McFarlane on Jun 2, 2008

    Mysterious and intriguing! Makes me hope for a second part.

  • quiet voice on Jun 2, 2008

    ..Hi there, well written and
    causes one to ponder….
    good job.

  • Judy Sheldon on Jun 5, 2008

    Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.

  • PR Mace on Jun 11, 2008

    Sometimes two people in love just to live in their own bubble for a while. That bubble is a good place to be. Nice job. Well written. Thanks for sharing.

  • dee gold on Jul 28, 2008

    mysterious that’s how love is.Keep it up friend!

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