http://authspot.com/tales/fairy-tale-3/ Sun, 22 Nov 2009 04:19:48 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 http://authspot.com/tales/fairy-tale-3/comment-page-1/#comment-707193 steph2009 Sat, 09 May 2009 21:37:19 +0000 http://authspot.com/tales/fairy-tale-3/#comment-707193 great add, very interesting and completely accurate!ox great add, very interesting and completely accurate!ox

]]> http://authspot.com/tales/fairy-tale-3/comment-page-1/#comment-707191 Terry Smith Tue, 14 Apr 2009 10:26:44 +0000 http://authspot.com/tales/fairy-tale-3/#comment-707191 Inspired! I find a real message of hope in this poem. If I were to offer one piece of constructive criticism it would be this: you should make more mention of the immigration issue, specifically the huge influx of Pakistani immigrants to this country (Britain). It's a hot topic, and as such deserves at least a passing mention in your poem. Personally, I believe we should shut the doors fast, and boot out all Pakistanis (or 'Pakis'; they call themselves that you know, it's not racist to say it) currently leeching off the state.<br /> Anyway, I look forward to reading your next poem, and remember: keep it topical, and always be cognizant of the immigration issue! Inspired! I find a real message of hope in this poem. If I were to offer one piece of constructive criticism it would be this: you should make more mention of the immigration issue, specifically the huge influx of Pakistani immigrants to this country (Britain). It’s a hot topic, and as such deserves at least a passing mention in your poem. Personally, I believe we should shut the doors fast, and boot out all Pakistanis (or ‘Pakis’; they call themselves that you know, it’s not racist to say it) currently leeching off the state.
Anyway, I look forward to reading your next poem, and remember: keep it topical, and always be cognizant of the immigration issue!

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