Comments on: Is That Salsa Fresh Enough for You? http://authspot.com/tales/is-that-salsa-fresh-enough-for-you/ Fri, 17 Feb 2012 11:27:47 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: Bullwinkle Muse http://authspot.com/tales/is-that-salsa-fresh-enough-for-you/comment-page-1/#comment-707255 Bullwinkle Muse Thu, 19 Mar 2009 01:00:08 +0000 http://authspot.com/tales/is-that-salsa-fresh-enough-for-you/#comment-707255 My wife was a manager at Longhorn for several years. I know first-hand (well, ok, 2nd hand) what that job can be like, from the stories she'd tell me nearly every night. Great story here, too. Well done. My wife was a manager at Longhorn for several years. I know first-hand (well, ok, 2nd hand) what that job can be like, from the stories she’d tell me nearly every night. Great story here, too. Well done.

]]> By: Andrew Davies http://authspot.com/tales/is-that-salsa-fresh-enough-for-you/comment-page-1/#comment-707253 Andrew Davies Fri, 13 Mar 2009 16:58:16 +0000 http://authspot.com/tales/is-that-salsa-fresh-enough-for-you/#comment-707253 Thank you, I love writing short stories the best. Thank you, I love writing short stories the best.

]]> By: Jo Oliver http://authspot.com/tales/is-that-salsa-fresh-enough-for-you/comment-page-1/#comment-707251 Jo Oliver Wed, 11 Mar 2009 06:51:33 +0000 http://authspot.com/tales/is-that-salsa-fresh-enough-for-you/#comment-707251 Great story. I know that it isnt the smartest thing to do, but I was silently giving Dan a high five in my head. I love the line \"contagious, or nauseating.\" Ive meet people that I have felt just like that about. <br /> <br /> You have a talent for the short story. I often skim short stories, but I read every word of this one. Great story. I know that it isnt the smartest thing to do, but I was silently giving Dan a high five in my head. I love the line \”contagious, or nauseating.\” Ive meet people that I have felt just like that about.

You have a talent for the short story. I often skim short stories, but I read every word of this one.

]]> By: papaleng http://authspot.com/tales/is-that-salsa-fresh-enough-for-you/comment-page-1/#comment-707249 papaleng Wed, 11 Mar 2009 05:22:55 +0000 http://authspot.com/tales/is-that-salsa-fresh-enough-for-you/#comment-707249 a great story told so nicely. i enjoy reading it. a great story told so nicely. i enjoy reading it.

]]> By: Ruby Hawk http://authspot.com/tales/is-that-salsa-fresh-enough-for-you/comment-page-1/#comment-707247 Ruby Hawk Wed, 11 Mar 2009 02:41:09 +0000 http://authspot.com/tales/is-that-salsa-fresh-enough-for-you/#comment-707247 Hooray for Dan.I applaud him. I'm happy he wasn't fired. He was long on patience and deserved a raise. Hooray for Dan.I applaud him. I’m happy he wasn’t fired. He was long on patience and deserved a raise.

]]> By: nutuba http://authspot.com/tales/is-that-salsa-fresh-enough-for-you/comment-page-1/#comment-707245 nutuba Tue, 10 Mar 2009 20:38:21 +0000 http://authspot.com/tales/is-that-salsa-fresh-enough-for-you/#comment-707245 This is an absolutely wonderful story! I could feel the tension in the air; I could sense Dan's temperature rising as the man kept dumping bowls of salsa on him; and the end, even though we see it coming, was described beautifully. Nicely done! This is an absolutely wonderful story! I could feel the tension in the air; I could sense Dan’s temperature rising as the man kept dumping bowls of salsa on him; and the end, even though we see it coming, was described beautifully. Nicely done!

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