Small towns are friendly places where people sit on their front porches and chat with the neighbors. Children play hop scotch and catch in the yard. Small towns are safe places, but that changed for one small town in Georgia on September 12th of this year.

There is a small town in Georgia where all is quiet and serene. There are big shade trees on every block. People sit on their porches every evening. Passers-by by wave and chat. The school house sits in the middle of town and nobody has any thought of their child being harmed. They never have been. They don’t worry about break-ins either. Most have never locked their doors and certainly don’t have burglar alarms. It’s just the way you would expect any small town in Georgia to be.

But it all changed the evening of September 12 of this year. A young woman and her male companion were at home. They had given shelter to a young homeless man who was there at the time, and another friend was visiting them when all hell broke loose. Two men burst into the house with guns. The woman shouted at them to get out of the house as one of them shot her in the mouth. Her companion lunged at the gunman knocking the gun out of his hand, was shot in the chest and knocked to the floor. He managed to get back to his feet but the other gunman shot him in the chest twice. He fell back mortally wounded.

One of the other men was grazed in the head with a bullet and the second shot in the back of the head while they were trying to get out the door. The one who was grazed with a bullet ran to a neighbor’s house and had them call 911, but by that time the two gunmen had escaped. The woman (Mellisa Smith) was air-lifted to Grady Hospital in Atlanta. She remains in critical condition. The man with the wound to the head was taken to a hospital, stayed over-night and was released the next day. The bullet went in the back of his head and came out over his ear, missing all vital areas. The woman’s companion (Ronnie Ferguson) bled out all his life’s blood on the scene. He remained on the floor while the police secured all evidence. His dead body could be seen by concerned neighbors gathered outside.

Mellisa and Ronnie were well known in this small town. Their door was always open to all their friends and neigbors. They never thought it could happen to them. Melisa’s doctors have told her family not to let her know Ronnie is dead if she should ever be able to ask. Right now the tubes running down her throat and throughout her body are her lifeline. So is the halo, with steel rods inserted into her head to keep it immobile. We still have hope that she will recover. Mellisa is a tough little nut and she has guts. If anybody can do it Mellisa can. Mellisa is my brother’s youngest daughter.

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  • RJ Chamberlain on Sep 24, 2008

    Ruby if this is indeed a work of non fiction, then my heart goes out to you and your family. If this is a work of fiction, then it is a brilliantly written piece of work. Either way, you really have me thinking.

  • Glynis Smy on Sep 24, 2008

    Ditto RJ…I pray it is not your niece but a character but if it is, my thoughts are with you all

  • SD Speirs on Sep 24, 2008

    Like the others, I am truly sorry for your niece. I pray she recovers well. (If in fact this is fiction, all I can say is WOW.)

    As a “small-town girl” myself, I understand the feeling of safety and friendliness in a small town. Some people are not brought up that way and just can’t understand sweet southern hospitality – and take advantage. Living in the city now, it’s a WHOLE different additude. Ugh, let me go back to the country! PLEASE!!! =]

  • neelam pandey on Sep 24, 2008

    It\’s areally beautiful description with minute observation of everything small thing which can be noticed. The picture set on one\’s mind comes out to be very realistic.

  • Unofre Pili on Sep 24, 2008

    Very vivid description of the place. It reminds me of my boyhood village. but I’m so sorry for the incidence.

  • C A Johnson on Sep 24, 2008

    I agree with everyone. I am sorry for your niece too. I really do hope she gets better. I will keep her in my prayers. I don’t live in a small town, but I do understand how people from small towns would feel safe and now that has been ruined. It was very well written, Ruby.

  • jo oliver on Sep 24, 2008

    I know you are not religious, but I will pray for your family and your niece’s recovery.

    I too live in small town America and people just dont expect these types of crimes and bad things to happen there, but it does.

    Thank you so much for sharing this story with us.

  • Ruby Hawk on Sep 24, 2008

    Thank you everyone for all your kind words and expressions of sympathy. Mellisa is indeed my niece. I had word today that she is slightly improved. The doctors say she is only aware for a moment and doesn’t remember when she wakes up again. They don’t want her to know about Ronnie untill she is much better. I dread to think about when she finds out what happened. Take care, Ruby

  • Darlene McFarlane on Sep 24, 2008

    Ruby, I am so sorry. Melissa and your family are in my prayers.

  • Abby Rose on Sep 24, 2008

    I lived in a small town for nine years as a child and it is so true that peoples doors are open to anyone. It is a sad day when that generousity and friendliness are violated in such a way as you described. Best wishes to your family and my prayers go out to you as well.

  • Jessica Rowe on Sep 25, 2008

    Your story was sad enough, but then I read the last line and got tears in my eyes. I could never imagine how you and your family feel, but please know my heart goes out to you, to Mellisa and the rest of your family.

  • BC Doan on Sep 25, 2008

    This is sad, Ruby, and I hope everything turned out all right.

  • PR Mace on Sep 25, 2008

    My dearest Ruby,

    I am so sorry this has happen to your family. I will keep you in my thoughs. It is terrible when bad things happen to wonderful, kind people. You have to wonder why?

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Sep 30, 2008

    I found that you’re good at telling tale. Take care!

  • Ruby Hawk on Sep 30, 2008

    I thank you all again for your good wishes and I wanted to let you know that Mellisa has improved. She is concious and can write messages with one hand. She still doesn’t know about Ronnie. She has asked and my brother told her that Ronnie is badly injured and they don’t know if he will be all right.

  • B Nelson on Sep 30, 2008

    good lord that is insane! have the police caught the people? What a terrible thing. I dont know what to say. I am stunned, as I am sure everyone involved is too. There will come a time when she has to be told, hope that goes well.

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Sep 30, 2008

    Ruby, I am glad you have friends here that you could share this with. Peace to your family.

  • acecampillo on Oct 1, 2008

    oh my, this is terrible indeed. You and your family will also be in my prayers always. God Bless You! :)

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 4, 2008

    Just to let you all know that Mellisa is still hanging in. The shooters have both been caught and are in jail. I don’t believe my brother will be given any information before the trial and there is no telling when that will be. I thank you all for your kind thoughts for Mellisa and our family. Best wishes to you all. Ruby

  • Johnny Yuma on Feb 5, 2009

    I knew this is true when you commented that she is your neice niece. (I can never remember if i comes first or e so I put the word in twice to make sure I have it right.) Until then I thought maybe you had taken up writing fiction and doing a great job of it. Unfortunately, small town America has changed from when you and I were kids. I didn\’t live in one; I lived way out in the country when growing up, but they were safe then. Now days I live in a town of roughly 3000 and wouldn\’t dream of leaving the door unlocked. In fact when I came back from GA, I lived in the country and wouldn\’t even leave the door unlocked out there.

    You told your story well, but I am sorry it even happened so that it needed told. Prayers for your neice and your entire family. Don\’t forget to keep us updated on what happens with her and with the men that did it to her and the others.

    Johnny Yuma

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