This is a story to scare some kids you’re angry at. lol not. This is just a story my uncle used to tell my brother and I when we were kids. Our mom always hated when he said it.

    Everyone had experienced it, lying in bed as children. In the dark, we had suddenly notice an inexplicable shadow. A mysterious shadow that it is staring at us and we are there scared to death. Next, a bizarre noise would come from the hallways, and everything in the room seemed to come to life. We close our eyes and covers our entire bodies from top to bottom so we wouldn’t be discovered by you know who, the bogeyman.

   If you don’t know who is the bogeyman I guess you had never been a child. The bogeyman is a child biggest fear. It fears because he comes late on the night when you’re sleeping in your bed and gets you. No one had live to tell.

   There are tales that say that if a kid is bad the bogeyman would come and get him/her. Since then, when children are bad the parents tell them that if they don’t stooping being bad the bogeyman will come and get them. So, obey your mom and dad or the bogeyman will come and get you. Wait, don’t turn off your lights.

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  • Sarah on Jun 17, 2009

    well written…I’m also scare of him

  • Mrs M on Jun 17, 2009

    I didn’t learn about the “bogeyman” until I was older. Nice write.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 17, 2009

    it’s the same story my mama told me when I was a child and didn’t want to go to bed. It scared me so I didn’t tell my kids that one.I told them the sand man would sprinkle sand in their eyes.

  • John on Jun 18, 2009

    my dad used to tell me about it and it made me very scare of the dark. I mean i couldn’t even walk in the night in my own house without a light.

  • Dude6587 on Jun 18, 2009

    nice article

  • Teto87ki4 on Jun 18, 2009

    the bogeyman…your uncle was a good story teller i bet

  • Lauren Axelrod on Jun 19, 2009

    Freaky..I remember this story

  • clafleur on Jun 20, 2009

    my grand father use to call the boogie man the LOO-LOO! it still scared the dickens out of me.

  • Johny87 on Jun 21, 2009

    scary

  • Darla Cooke on Jun 21, 2009

    My Grandparents raised me and they were against dancing. I remember them telling me as a child that if I danced the boogeyman would come through the floor and get me. I was scared to dance at all for years. They also said if you went fishing on Sunday the boogeyman would come out of the water and grab you. Maybe that’s why I don’t care for fishing now.

  • swatilohani on Jun 22, 2009

    great

  • ken bultman on Jun 22, 2009

    Good one, Francy, I’ll leave the light on.

  • LoveNFood on Jun 22, 2009

    well done Francy

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jun 22, 2009

    Well-describes tale. Thanks for sharing. Liked it.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jun 22, 2009

    I’m sorry for the typing error.

    Well-described tale. Thanks for sharing. Liked it.

  • goodselfme on Jun 22, 2009

    boogey man stories are awful to tell to kids. I sure think you are ok here since if I have a bad dream, I can’t come and get you! Very creative post.

  • Deep Blue on Jun 23, 2009

    People in shadows are true, if only kids were left on their own, they will see them naturally without the scare. Think about which world is bigger, the living or the dead…We just have to keep ourselves strong considering they have a world away which may merge with ours at times.

  • J L Williams on Jun 23, 2009

    Nothing quite like a child’s fear at night-time to set the shivers running down one’s spine…nice one mate!

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