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The Ghost at the Bar

James DeVere on Nov 24, 2008
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A man dies and goes to “Heaven” – a cautionary tale.

Moral: Don’t believe everything you are taught.

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  • Jasin on Nov 24, 2008

    Cool story.

  • Countrymom on Nov 24, 2008

    Clever!

  • poo on Nov 24, 2008

    James, I loved it very much

  • lindalulu on Nov 24, 2008

    James another one to amaze me…great one!

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 24, 2008

    You better believe it. Never believe anything just because people tell you to. Always follow your own instincts. Take care, Ruby

  • joystick7 on Nov 25, 2008

    I loved this one!! Keep up the good work!

  • JA Laflin on Nov 25, 2008

    Well written, has somewhat of a Grimm’s Fairy Tales vibe to it, but with almost more of a Roald Dahl humor. Good moral.

    Josh

  • Morgana on Dec 27, 2008

    Even though I read it a month later, I would like to tell you that I enjoyed very much.

  • denus on Jan 26, 2009

    great read, well done.

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