A cautionary tale about ambition.

A man led a distinguished military career. At the end of his days he was a General of the US Army – having fought in Vietnam followed by a rise through rank to a most powerful position. 

In his teenage years he was top of his class. As a top sportsman and scholar he had also been a notorious bully – fighting a nerd and stealing his girl – then taking the accolades for what he did to become the high school jock.

He was driven by ambition and upon return from Vietnam he knew he wanted to rise above the ordinary rank of foot soldier.  At the time a colleague, who secretly adored him, assisted in this and after many years he reached his secret goal – to be general.  Upon promotion he had her demoted and she left Washington for an overseas posting.

When, finally he was decorated as General, one man stood in his path of being the top General.  One night after a fake friendly meeting in a bar he took the man out into the woods and shot him.  Being clever he covered it all up and it was listed as an accident.  That’s how he got to the top.

When visiting the troops in Afghanistan in 2008, he was giving a speech.  An Afghan security guard in an Armani suit hugged him, after his speech, to the sound of cheering soldiers. This triggered a suicide bomb and the two were blown into the afterlife.

He, “woke up,” to find himself in an ultramodern building that was very cold. As he came to his senses he realised it was a library.  He felt very tired – the kind of tiredness you feel if you have too much sleep – and the place was pin-silent.  He could see someone in the room, far away, hunched over as if reading and oblivious to him.  He tried to call him but when he opened his mouth his exhausted voice made no sound; he was mute as well.

Getting to grips with his surrounds but barely able to move from the modern chair at a low table of this library he noticed many books on the shelves nearby.  Not one had printing on its’ spine! “This is strange, books without titles on their spines,” he thought, “Where the hell am I?”  The room became cooler; typical of ultra-modern, over-air conditioned buildings and he shivered. Hugh picture windows displayed very bright gardens outside but without horizon. The contrast and glare stung his eyes.

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  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 6, 2009

    That was a powerful tale along the lines of ‘A Christmas Carol’.
    A great write

    Christine

  • Jasin on Jan 6, 2009

    Great read, nicely done.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Jan 6, 2009

    i enjoyed this,you write well,

  • clay hurtubise on Jan 6, 2009

    Also reminded me of a Christmas Carol. A short time ago there was a special on one of the news networks about bullies. While those that were bullied had strong memories and wounds from the assults, the bullies didn’t remember (or admit to) the incidents. I really think some peoples brains are wired differently, my wires are a mess!
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Morgana on Jan 6, 2009

    Very interesting story. I most admit I really felt sorry for the guy as he was reading the books.That’s a very good message you have there.One must not achieve success by cheating their way hurting others.

  • Rask Balavoine on Jan 6, 2009

    “Rather be a humble door-keeper for a day in God’s temple than live in the tents of the rich and wicked”.

    Powerful stuff James, and a good read.

  • papaleng on Jan 6, 2009

    a well-written one. I enjoy reading it.

  • K Kristie on Jan 6, 2009

    Another good write of yours. Enjoyed it.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jan 6, 2009

    You have an interesting story with enough material to make you stop and think. Good writing.

  • Joie Schmidt on Jan 7, 2009

    Very nice work!!*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Lauren Axelrod on Jan 7, 2009

    Another interesting trip through your mind. I just love it. Seeing your life through the pages of a book right before your eyes. Very interesting.

  • denus on Jan 10, 2009

    wow that was very intriguing and amazing,

    cheers mate,

    denus

  • eddiego65 on Jan 11, 2009

    Great absorbing story. I cannot stop reading!

  • Deelstra on Jan 14, 2009

    You are a phenomenal writer.
    Wonderful prose and style.

  • Patrick Bernauw on Jan 22, 2009

    I really enjoyed this one!

  • C Jordan on Jan 23, 2009

    A very good read. Thanks James

  • Jade Brooks on Jan 26, 2009

    Hey there you go again….Love the way your stories draw someone in and then end with a moral. I’ll write mo to you later.

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