This is not only my complete life but everyone’s.It’s just reality of my own and others.

My mom told me when I was born.Hall echoed with my babyish noise.Curling and spreading my legs that someone could give something to eat.Moving my round beady eyes and looking  everything so keenly and curiously.Oh! I was baby.I still remember I used to play on roads and in gardens.Stubborn as mule.Crying and favouring for my wishes and fulfilled them by my parents in blink of an eye.Not aware of vice and virtual.Innocence was evident from my face as I used to smile,play and giggle.Oh! I was a kid.

Now, I tease everyone,flirting with guys,others emotions and gossips.Tittering and straying on roads in scorching sun light or at night.Bunking school and lying to my parents and to my heart.Playing with books as they are my friends.Forgot the good and made friend an evil and joined wicked league.Now,I  walk myself and head any where I like without the guidance and permission of elders as I say,”I’m grown up,don’t teach me.I know whats better.Try to follow me.Parties,heaven what a lovely series of life.I’m gullible  and people deceive me although I know that he/she is just passing time, but I don’t understand that I’m betrayed.Still trust everyone who walks into my life.Oh!I’m teenager.

I hope I will find a supporter.I’ll be cascade into tragic moments completely.Tension of my life will increase.I will understand the ups and downs of the life.That time,I will be fully aware about the world.I would look back at my past and memories,keep them ever green and cry that why didn’t I learnt from my mistakes and now facing.Oh! that will be my middle age.

Totally weak and flimsy,dependent.No peace,no comfort and will try to hide myself in youngsters to get relief.Breath will become so hard to take.When I’ll try to solve kid’s problems and will be involved in there matters so they will feel that I’m fly in ointment.Just sitting in corners as alive trash.I will know the cost and real meaning of life.I will be wishing to be born again so I can have every groovy moments to enjoy.I’ll be waiting for my death.Like hay gradually I’ll cease away.Oh!I will be old.Now, teenager and I have to get through two more scenes.

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  • pattiann on Sep 17, 2011

    Interesting and well written

  • erwinkennythomas on Sep 17, 2011

    nice thoughts! most interesting!

  • ASWIN 7148685 on Sep 17, 2011

    You are impossible teenager….. :)

  • galore on Sep 17, 2011

    lovely share

  • ittech on Sep 18, 2011

    thanks lovely share

  • Martin Kloess on Sep 18, 2011

    you have martins seal of i like it.

  • Elle64 on Sep 18, 2011

    Teenage thoughts can be confusing!

  • FX777222999 on Sep 18, 2011

    That’s life and you have face it with your heart and mind. Thanks for sharing.

  • pwchinaga on Sep 19, 2011

    I LOVE IT.NICE SHARE

  • marqjonz on Sep 19, 2011

    Beautiful use of stream-of-consciousness–with a much better use of paragraphing than I usually see in that mode of writing. Well done.

  • marqjonz on Sep 19, 2011

    Beautiful use of stream-of-consciousness–with a much better use of paragraphing than I usually see in that mode of writing. Well done.

  • marqjonz on Sep 19, 2011

    Beautiful use of stream-of-consciousness–with a much better use of paragraphing than I usually see in that mode of writing. I’m jealous. Well done.

  • VoIP on Sep 20, 2011

    It sounds like you have lived a lifetime. And all at the age of 16.
    I had to look twice at your profile. I thought I was reading the poetry of an adult. Goodness.

  • beingwell on Sep 22, 2011

    Stay happy!

  • nurzaira on Sep 24, 2011

    nice article, life is like a real film

  • tonyleather on Sep 24, 2011

    Teenage Torment?

  • freebird989 on Sep 25, 2011

    Gracious! But i would say, in every phase of our life we always have a choice to make, a choice to live our life!

  • Joe Ram on Sep 25, 2011

    Lovely artwork.

  • juliachild on Sep 26, 2011

    great share

  • thelyricwriter on Sep 27, 2011

    I have always been amazed how good of a writer you are at your age. You are very talented and you can go as far as you want. I mean that!

  • thelyricwriter on Sep 27, 2011

    I have always been amazed how good of a writer you are at your age. You are very talented and you can go as far as you want. I mean that! You have a special gift and a big heart. Great qualities.

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Sep 27, 2011

    Thank you.

  • girishpuri on Sep 30, 2011

    nice share

  • Jonas N on Sep 30, 2011

    interesting

  • theworkoutgeneral on Sep 30, 2011

    good article! very well- written

  • Chinmay Chakravarty on Oct 2, 2011

    Live life!

  • FX777222999 on Oct 4, 2011

    Revisiting this article.

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Oct 4, 2011

    Thankx @FX777222999

  • thelyricwriter on Oct 4, 2011

    Figured I would read it again. I have always been impressed with your writing talent.

  • The Virtual Workers on Oct 8, 2011

    Awesome………….

  • WolfEmDown on Oct 9, 2011

    nice pictures

  • Andrew Handley on Oct 10, 2011

    You’re an excellent writer. Loved this. Really like that last picture too

  • CHIPMUNK on Oct 12, 2011

    Well written and expressed

  • magus magus on Oct 16, 2011

    nice one:)

  • Muzammil196 on Oct 28, 2011

    Good piece of creative writing.

  • ittech on Nov 29, 2011

    lovely

  • ittech on Dec 7, 2011

    lovely share very graciouis

  • Vinaya says good bye on Feb 4, 2012

    You are very erudite.

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