Summer love has always been seasonal…

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The summer sun vicariously surrounds,
And the warm breeze tickles my mind,
As every playful thought abounds:
Our love seduced a season.

Your breath simmers upon my lips,
Like a settling August fog
Upon smooth-faced cliffs:
I am left misty and disoriented.

Your words lingered upon anxious ears,
And I cherished your every sentence,
Refusing to aknowledge my fears:
I became deaf to tomorrow.

Your touch moved me beyond measure,
Like a progressive, rolling lovequake,
With aftershocks of pleasure:
Forever I will be shaken.

Our time together was an emotional swirl,
With gusts of sheer perfection
In a sea of romantic whirl:
We rode waves of pure frustration.

Your goodbye still hovers,
Like toxic clouds
Trickling rain upon lovers:
That was the beginning of my storm.

This summer love had no recourse,
As seasonal entities seldom do,
And there is no time for remorse:
I step out into the wintery chill.

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  • drelayaraja on Nov 23, 2009

    Great season, good photo and lovely poem. well done.

  • Rinks Desai on Nov 23, 2009

    very touching

  • Teves on Nov 23, 2009

    Nice info.

  • Papa Sparks on Nov 23, 2009

    Very moving and intense.

  • Sunitha Stalin on Nov 23, 2009

    good, liked it

  • diamondpoet on Nov 23, 2009

    Very passionate write.

  • T. S. Lewis on Nov 23, 2009

    You could easily be my favorite poetess. Awesome. you have me shaking. Check out “Connect the Dots.”

  • Themax on Nov 23, 2009

    very beautiful!

  • abhishek40914 on Nov 24, 2009

    very nice

  • Hansika on Nov 24, 2009

    nice one….

  • diamondpoet on Nov 26, 2009

    You are a talented and I enjoy your work.

  • obikelvin on Nov 27, 2009

    Bravo! Bravo! That’s inspirational.Great write!

  • Glynis Smy on Nov 30, 2009

    That was a lovely piece to read, thanks for sharing.

  • Stan Wilson on Dec 4, 2009

    That was great,may all your seasons be ’seasons of seductions’

  • jaysland on Dec 17, 2009

    Great articulation of your feelings!~Jay

  • Anupam Kachroo on Jan 12, 2010

    ‘Forever I will be shaken’ and

    ‘And there is no time for remorse:
    I step out into the wintery chill’

    seem to contradict
    …. but gel only because of the title …. …

    being a student of literature just cnt help my criticism …
    U WRITE FINE :)

  • yes me on Nov 17, 2011

    I simply like it no matter the season cheers Linda

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