Beware of the moose.

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“Stolen kisses are always sweetest”
                                  
~Leigh Hunt

I saw him across the snow
His big nose coming at me
I froze in complete shock
As his mouth descended
Slowly capturing mine
I couldn’t believe it!
Such impertinence!
How dare he!
Stealing a kiss -
From me!
I’m a lady!
You simply can’t…
And then suddenly
My mind went blank
And my body numb
My resolve scattering
I had forgotten…
What was I saying?

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  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 4, 2010

    Nice One….

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Feb 4, 2010

    Wow…a beautiful poem.

  • johnnydod on Feb 4, 2010

    And it was good, I will be back for more

  • Mickey Pig Knuckles on Feb 4, 2010

    Oh Yes Lady Sunshine, the power of a kiss can create so much confusion mentally and physically lol. I really enjoyed this poem by you and the picture is so perfect. I also liked the bit of confusion towards the end. Thank You for always feeding our appetites for more of you and your creative writing. You are such a Gem Lady…

    Mickey Pig Knuckles

  • Val Mills on Feb 4, 2010

    You always manage to leave me with a smile. This is a treasure.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Feb 4, 2010

    ONLY LADIES LET ONE THEY LIKE TO STEAL AND SEAL A KISS LADY POWER IS UNFATHOMABLE ONLY SHE DECIDES WHEN….
    LHLHLH

  • Kris Tagre on Feb 4, 2010

    a stolen kiss is sometimes romantic. It leaves you with a smirk. lovely lovely poem (”,)

  • Atanacio on Feb 4, 2010

    well sunshine even your simple writes entertain :)

  • Jenny Heart on Feb 4, 2010

    Nicely done!

  • bailieman on Feb 4, 2010

    A smooch from a moose. Nice picture and poem.

  • richardpeeej on Feb 4, 2010

    Great poem my friend….
    ……a moose on the loose is smitten by a kitten!

  • 8Shei8 on Feb 4, 2010

    I love the picture! I do not mind a stolen kiss only if from a special moose :)

  • Guy Hogan on Feb 4, 2010

    I love this playful poem; and you found the perfect photo to go with it. The cat didn’t run away. It wasn’t afraid, just curious. And it seems to have turned out, this time, alright.

  • VTech on Feb 4, 2010

    Wonderful Written

  • AlmaG on Feb 4, 2010

    Lovely stolen kisses poem :)

  • Shirley Shuler on Feb 4, 2010

    Hi Lady Sunshine, a moose stealing a kiss. I love it and the picture you choose is perfect!!

  • deep blue on Feb 5, 2010

    That was lovely, a cat-moose kiss where it used to be cat and mouse.

  • Sushant94 on Feb 5, 2010

    awesome ya!

  • T. S. GARP on Feb 16, 2010

    Kisses will do that….. Nice one!

  • T. S. GARP on Feb 16, 2010

    Kisses will do that…. nice one!

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