Based on a true story, Rya is a college student who falls in love with a girl at Wall-mart. It tragicly ends when she leaves and he falls in to a depression and is visited by his guardian angel. Find out what she says. When I wrote the orginal "An Angel Visit" I had many other visits from "Sarah". There were also many visits from other angels some that weren’t that nice. "An Angel Visit II" is based on my personal experience with God and becoming Christian. That night I was tested was the scariest moment in my life. The realization that there are evil forces that wanted me was very scary. It wasn’t until the visit from Jesus and the third installment of "An Angel Visit III" that I realized that He wants me to write for Him. I feel I have a unique ability to write. I hope you enjoy reading these stories.
An Angel Visit
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Ryan Keith Johnson
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There was a boy named Rya. He was so sad and sick of how his life was. This young man wanted a change that would alter his path. Rya wanted to write his fantasy. He remembered how relaxing it was to sit and day dream of his dream woman in college class in Rice Lake, Wisconsin. She was tall with long blonde hair, red thin lips, and amazing blue eyes. Her skin was as white as milk and fair as a princess of the old times. He remembered her from the time he was in eighth grade. Sometimes he heard her speak to him and she wanted Rya to call her Sarah. A sweet name for such a perfect face that entered such mind and what a beautiful imagination it would be to write a fantasy.
The first two weeks of college life fell under his feet and Rya hated sitting in a class of lecture by teachers that had no idea what his future held. A few of the students didn’t care for his long hair and his physics teacher was making a point to the class that women could pick up a chair a certain way that men couldn’t, but not for Rya he was able to pick up the chair just fine. One thought of him as a girl because he could do it, but the teacher was confused and astonished because he had not known any man to defy the laws of physics. Not for Rya he was unlike any man and no rule or limits would keep him captive.
He hated the wait to make a break to his true destiny besides Mechanical Design. He wanted to write and publish his novel, but needed to find his muse. He was young, handsome with light brown hair, deep blue eyes, broad lips and the youth of a young prince with the appearance no older than the age of sixteen.
He would wake up every morning depressed with the life that was set before him by his parents. Don’t do this; go do that, compete with those group of people, don’t go out with that girl, go to college to get ahead of everybody, which he reluctantly did to make them happy. Everyday he wondered when this pain would end and when the hole in such heart would heal to a close.
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