The emotions I felt when I found out I was pregnant.

whats my inspiration.its never meant enough.and now that ive lost whats good.im gaining what is “tough”.my heart grew tired hard and cold.because you blistered it.and 19 years of confusion.ive had too much of it.i want to be untainted.i want to be free.i want to be that happy girl i was when i was three.for my sons sake.i need to get away.so he can say that i can love.like love’s never gone away

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  • Darla Smith on Jan 10, 2009

    Nice poem. I really like this one.

  • Fegger on Jan 11, 2009

    Betrayal? Self-imposed whereby you’re addressing your own admonishment for certain decisions or a betrayal of trust by another? The resolve and destination are enlightening–good close.

  • pablina on Jan 13, 2009

    love it. to the point. can i make a suggestion though. would be easier to read with a few more spaces. however if thats how you write best then keep with yr thing. x

  • Hendrik on Jan 8, 2011

    The main thing is you kept your head up high! Good girl!

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