Random story I had in my head. might continue…might not~
But I’ll just stick it here and maybe if I’m bored one day I’ll write a bit in the future…?
The plot (inside my head – brief)
The main girl wanted to commit suicide because she no longer had a reason to live, but when she finally realises a reason to live, she risked her life to save another person.
The girl didn’t die in the process, but she ended up in a coma. Her spirit arises, but had forgotten everything about herself.
Spirits of higher rank told her that because she had committed a good deed before her death, she is given a chance to live – yet the chance had to be earned.
Closer – just a little closer and it would all be over.
Voices, footsteps and even the sound of falling leaves seemed to be tormenting her. She glanced up at the sky, envying the pigeons flying freely above her pitiful head. She was cold, yet the distasteful feeling of warmth was rushing into her soulless, black eyes, blurring her vision – making everything seeming darker than it actually was.
Her heart finally made the decision for her. She took a step forward but advanced no further. Was she scared? She wasn’t. Not one tiny little bit – but the wind suddenly wrapped its arms around her, whispering the words she had longed to hear for a long time – comforting her.
‘I love you,’ were the words she heard. She didn’t know who said them but it saved her. Those words were spoken so softly, it seemed to just stick in her mind. In a sense you could think of it like glue, or you could think of it like a piece of missing puzzle that just completes her. Those words weren’t just words to her – they create a reason for her to continue living.
Her heart sunk to her stomach as a punishment for her stupidity. She wiped away those transparent, delicate crystals with the back of her hand, and started to back away from the busy road. However, maybe it was fate…because seconds later, she found another reason to rush into the busy road.
“Please! Please, someone save her!” a middle aged women shrieked desperately, as she witnessed her four year old girl running into the middle of the road where she would face the monstrous white Ferrari, which has the ability to take her life within seconds.
The world seemed to have frozen in that instant. The little girl watched as the car advanced, whilst the mother could only cry from the distance – praying for a miracle to happen. The man in the car was too occupied with the phone in his hand to notice the small figure before his car. Finally, the girl who initially wanted to die jumped in front of the car as planned. Yet her motives were no longer the same.
And so, the girl who initially planned to die ended up saving someone who was about to die.
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