Crazy? Who really decides that?

Voices calling,

whispers rising,

then falling,

face flushed red,

shaking her head,

walking stiffly,

like the living dead,

she was arguing with herself,

and she seemed pleased,

then suddenly,

the argument ceased,

touching people as they walked by,

some smile, others try,

a brawny man wearing a leather jacket

shoved her aside,

she bowed and cried,

then she started laughing,

chatting almost inaudibly,

her brown hair

falling down over her eyes,

she laughs loudly,

then she cries,

but the conflict lies

almost between the morals of God

and the morals of society,

insanity was clearly written

across her face,

but does that mean

she has fallen from grace?

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Comments (13)
  • Eldridge on Mar 9, 2011

    Weird poem to say lest….

  • Sourav on Mar 9, 2011

    Hmmm… very well depicted.

  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 9, 2011

    A well expressed poem.

  • CVSivaprakashan on Mar 9, 2011

    Great work!

  • real lady on Mar 10, 2011

    She is really insane. Great poem.

  • LoveDoctor on Mar 10, 2011

    Cause you\’re hot then you\’re cold
    You\’re yes and you\’re no
    You\’re in then you\’re out
    You\’re up then you\’re down
    Someone call the doctor
    The girl in this poem has a case of love bi-polar

    Love the flowers you used in your image. good work.

  • John Paul V on Mar 10, 2011

    Great poem!

  • yes me on Mar 20, 2011

    A street scene all over cheers to this one Frank

  • Deskpole on May 18, 2011

    Crazy enough to be good :) Like it man

  • Deskpole on May 18, 2011

    Crazy enough to be good :)

    Like it man

  • Sammy2000 on Feb 1, 2012

    crazy I admit it but I loved it

  • Fordstam on Apr 30, 2012

    i like it

  • Bozz25 on May 28, 2012

    bro this was crazy lol

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