Hunting is an exciting trip in the wild.

Two Friends on Hunting

There were two best friends who are a hunter lover. They agreed to have a trip for days in the near forest. Packing everything they need, so they set off excited and happy.

It was the first experience of Joe to hunt in this rain forest. But James had already been in this place several times. Joe always follow James on the lead. They walk carefully and watchful, eying for the wild animals around.

James told Joe to keep distance a little bit. Not to disturb and drive away wild animals due to their noise. Then Joe walk behind James in a distance. They both go on for a mile, quietly and extra careful.

Can we take this home?

After hours of their journey, James heard a scream. He ran back so fast to find out what happen to Joe. Why are you screaming? Have you meet a wild animals? Are there snakes? What … what.. is happening to you? Joe answer, I run across a snake – but I didn’t shout. I saw a giant bear – but I didn’t scream.

James ask again, and what then – made you scream horribly? Joe sighed — when the two squirrel, crawl up my pants. I over heard them saying … that, should we take this two eggs back home or eat this  all now.

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  • adrian946 on Dec 16, 2010

    Enjoy hunting.

  • adrian946 on Dec 16, 2010

    Be careful in hunting.

  • adrian946 on Dec 16, 2010

    A clever eyes.

  • adrian946 on Dec 16, 2010

    Do you have a clear hearing??

  • adrian946 on Dec 16, 2010

    Learn the language of the wild.

  • eve on Dec 17, 2010

    In life journey we are the hunter.

  • adrian946 on Dec 20, 2010

    A trip to remember.

  • dona on Dec 21, 2010

    I love the trip.

  • mary on Dec 21, 2010

    Wish to have a hunting trip.

  • windy on Dec 21, 2010

    I’ll go for a trip.

  • cyle on Dec 23, 2010

    Keep watching.

  • char on Dec 23, 2010

    Keep an eyes.

  • jene on Dec 23, 2010

    Watch that steps.

  • emy on Dec 23, 2010

    Slowly….

  • gay on Dec 23, 2010

    Careful…..

  • gie on Dec 23, 2010

    Slow motion.

  • ara on Dec 23, 2010

    Go on –

  • gerel on Dec 23, 2010

    I like this.

  • ara on Dec 23, 2010

    Recommend…

  • merie on Dec 23, 2010

    Read… ok!!!!

  • gene on Dec 23, 2010

    Preserve the forest.

  • chee on Dec 25, 2010

    Like the trip.

  • chard on Dec 25, 2010

    Wow ..trip.

  • adrian946 on Dec 26, 2010

    I love it.

  • adrian946 on Dec 26, 2010

    Nice one.

  • adrian946 on Dec 26, 2010

    Its safe.

  • adrian946 on Dec 27, 2010

    excited so much…

  • adrian946 on Dec 27, 2010

    how i wish… i will–

  • adrian946 on Dec 27, 2010

    thrilling…

  • adrian946 on Dec 27, 2010

    anxious… to the max….

  • adrian946 on Dec 29, 2010

    think safe

  • adrian946 on Dec 29, 2010

    feel the cool breeze

  • adrian946 on Dec 29, 2010

    i like hunting so much

  • adrian946 on Dec 29, 2010

    ready for excitement

  • adrian946 on Dec 29, 2010

    wonderful trip

  • adrian946 on Dec 30, 2010

    careful in the forest

  • adrian946 on Dec 31, 2010

    happy journey

  • adrian946 on Dec 31, 2010

    moment of joy

  • adrian946 on Jan 3, 2011

    liesure

  • adrian946 on Jan 11, 2011

    be careful in the forest

  • adrian946 on Feb 1, 2011

    like hunting

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