To Jesus;
this is an avenue for people to write not to harass people. But it begs the question why do you keep reading her stuff. It’s not critical comments otherwise you would have given your real name but you actually put yourself in the same category as Jesus. So as for your God complex don’t keep reading Michelle Parkers writing and by going out of your way to leave a comment all your doing is making her happy while she gets paid for it whether the comment is bad or good.

Good points Jesus NOT he’s probably upset because he beats his wife.

They are VOWS not vowels!

Hey Michelle, what a stir peice of writing has created, that is a good peice of writing!

Thank-you Lucy for your kind words.

I agree with Lucy. There are people out there that can feel your words and relate to what you wrote. Keep writing. Everybody is not going to be your cheerleader. You might get a bad audience. But keep writing. You write strong. You write with meaning.

I think Gail is right. You write strong with meaning and with all of your feelings. Don’t worry about the audience. If they want to read your stuff they will.
Heck, I’ve only gotten a few comments on my writings
(as opposed to my artwork). My advice? Keep writing!!!!

You have some great ideas and concepts here

Keep writing, you cannot and will not please everyone. That does not mean it is good or not good, it just means that some one has a different point of view.Love to you, you are stronger than that!

Michelle, I love this keepsake – I will suggest it to the young and old adults in my life (soon to be or already married). This is family, divorce court or counseling material! Something for the home (and the garage) – oh yeah, keep a copy in your bible or wallet and store it in the heart! It’s an affirmative prayer! Do I sound a bit radical?

Since the time when you wrote this my thoughts have done a full circle. That is a part of accepting,forgiving and letting things go. I remember the feelings I had towards the first comments and I know I have come a long way, what about you?

Michelle, I read this piece. Its fantastic. Men who beat they’re wives shouldn’t even get married.I believe all wife abusers should be put in a boxing ring with the meanest men on earth and see who wins. guarantee it won’t be the abusers. Take it from a man, a man that abuses his wife is no man. He’s the lowest form of human kind. The worst. Keep up the good work Michelle. I’m 100% behind you. Great job!!!

Dear Michelle,

This piece is beautiful and tragic. I feel the struggle of a lady who knows she is worth more but is frightened of that. She needs people who can help stand strong for her and support her like one would make sure the structure of a house was strong and sturdy before building the rest of the house. It also made me think of the movie “What’s Love Got to Do with it” the story about Tina Turner. If this is a poem written about true events, please know that love does not hurt you. Love is patient, love is kind, love is gentle. You have more strength inside than you may have ever believed you did.

Best wishes to you, always.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.

Michelle, this is a strong message that every husband should read before getting married. Actually, every woman should read it too and give it to her busband to be and get his reaction. If the reaction isn’t what it should be, she should find another man to marry. Thanks for this story.
Damon

Dear Damon,
How true your words are I couldn’t have said it more right. Also your very welcome if it helps 1 woman or 1 man then it was worth while.

Dear Wink, Gail, JNV, Lucy, R.B. Parsley and Liane,
thank-you for your kind words and support.
Love Shelley.
xoxoxoxoxoxoxo