The intimate gaze of a man.

Enchantment of ecstasy
Enraptured by you
Whose gaze so intimate
Keeping me spellbound
Without a single touch…

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Whispers across my skin
Shivers up my spine
Sighs upon my bosom
Murmurs on my thighs
Just one look from you
Beneath your smoldering gaze
I knew you were mine
My glorious Hwang…

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Oh magnificent warrior
Ravish me with your eyes
Let it linger upon me
Caressing my every curve
Embracing me exquisitely
Holding me forever
To eternity
My enchantment of ecstasy…

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  • calellomegastore on Sep 15, 2010

    simply beautiful :)

  • giftarist on Sep 15, 2010

    This is nice.

  • Wordcrafter on Sep 15, 2010

    This piece is intimately awesome!

  • My World on Sep 15, 2010

    Thanks for share.

  • Ethics0006 on Sep 16, 2010

    Very Beautiful

  • Joseph Scott on Sep 16, 2010

    Great piece! Beautifully written!

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Sep 16, 2010

    Nicely said.

  • Shirley Shuler on Sep 16, 2010

    Hi Lady Sunshine, Mina and Hwang, my two favorite people, it’s always good to see them!!

  • Melody SJAL on Sep 19, 2010

    So lovely and smooth.

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 19, 2010

    A wonderful piece. I love the way you have presented it too.

    Christine

  • Goodselfme on Sep 20, 2010

    Very well thought out and the words flow so well.The title is excellent too.

  • howl on Sep 27, 2010

    I have always loved reading your stories about these two characters! Though they may seem short, it never fails to deliver such a huge impact within me. The passion and love hwang an mina have for each, you have always managed to capture and interpret it with such accuracy!

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