He used to take her hand with a lot of respect and they used to walk talking and maybe laughing but she had always the fear to be discovered…. so one day a lonely park surprised the young girl maybe not so much to him because he tried to be alone with her a lot of times.

He suddenly stopped their walk and took her in his arms. Finally, Kate has that especial first sensation of a warm hug; it was really nice because of his muscles, his closeness, her first closeness.

She began to tremble. He smiled at her and looked right into her eyes, took her face with one hand and touched gently his lips against hers. Really nice for a beginning, “that wasn´t that bad, maybe I could use to that”, she thought.

He took away his face to see her expression, her shy smile and blush on her cheeks were just good signs for the boy so he reached again to a new kiss but this time was not as gentle as the first contact. He wanted to go farther, she was an “experienced girl” anyway and that was “not” a first kiss. Big mistake! Huge mistake!

His face came close and his lips touched hers but now his mouth opened wide and his tongue suddenly and without notice went into her mouth and touched her tongue.

- “Oh my God! I just want to die!”She thought.

It was the most terrible sensation she´d ever felt, his saliva was thick and abundant… and his tongue was a complete strange body into her mouth! She just felt sick and pushed him away. He was really surprised and scared for her abrupt reaction, but then she pulled him close and hugged him hiding her face on his chest. The mix of shame, repulsion, confusion, disappointment were big, now she realized what she had done. He was a good friend and they were in a point of no return. That kiss or better said terrible kiss was changing everything, she didn´t want to feel that again!

“That´s what happens when you tell lies… Curiosity kills the cat”. There was a voice screaming that phrases in her mind. She had to do something to solve all this mess her curiosity got into.

A lie to cover a lie… She began to tell him that she had problems at home (lie). She needed to do something quick. She just wanted to be at her home´s security. She didn´t want to see Andrew again (obvious reasons… now she was really scared).

He was a complete gentleman for his age and walked her home, days later she couldn´t hide anymore and told him that she didn´t want to have a “relation” because it was not the correct time and she needed just a friend. He accepted a little confused but they were friends now.

That is the end of an awful first kiss. But then Kate met Charles….

The end.

First kiss of Kate – Part One.

First kiss of Kate – Part Two.

 

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  • The Silver Phoenix on Dec 14, 2010

    a really interesting 3rd part. looking forward to what happened next.

  • Frederick Dewar on Dec 14, 2010

    Interesting story :)

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Dec 14, 2010

    A kiss gone wrong.

  • Shirley Shuler on Dec 14, 2010

    Good write, looking forward to what happens next.

  • LCM Linda on Dec 14, 2010

    Interesting story. If one can’t enjoy the kiss, it’s difficult for that person to come closer to his / her lover.

  • The Soul Explorer on Dec 15, 2010

    Is there any continuation to this story? or this is the end?

  • papaleng on Dec 15, 2010

    beautifully-written.

  • Starpisces on Dec 15, 2010

    so cute story, the wrong kiss…..muak…
    :)

  • yes me on Dec 19, 2010

    What treat is in store for poor Charlie… liked it cheers

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