Flash Fiction

Guy Hogan on Nov 14, 2010

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This is a flash fiction story about passion.

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It was our first time and that night in the moon light as she trembled beneath me on the sweat soaked sheets in my efficiency apartment, I had to put my hand over her mouth.

“Shhhhh,” I whispered. “I have neighbors.”

The End

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Ubel Ein on Nov 14, 2010
Ha! Good one, Guy!
charmfe on Nov 14, 2010
nice one.
Jimmy Shilaho on Nov 14, 2010
Hmmmmmh, you amaze me.
Uma Shankari on Nov 14, 2010
Oh, yes!! You have readers too.
SuperMember on Nov 14, 2010
Amazing!
yes me on Nov 14, 2010
Good lines here Guy cheers
wonder on Nov 14, 2010
This is unfair, ha ha. Fantastic!
mahesh golani on Nov 14, 2010
Hahahahaha! Oh my God…A war veteran! trruly!
clandestinef on Nov 14, 2010
Great post. Thanks for sharing this one.
albert1jemi on Nov 14, 2010
wel written
lillyrose on Nov 14, 2010
Great example of flash fiction! *thumbs up*
LoveDoctor on Nov 14, 2010
How many years ago was this? Lol.
PR Mace on Nov 14, 2010
Wow, that could have been about me.
SharifaMcFarlane on Nov 15, 2010
Lol.
suhail on Nov 16, 2010
yeah i am getting amazed too .. good one ..
Raj the Tora on Nov 17, 2010
Wow, such a profound title with subtle content. Impressive indeed Guy. Very impressive.
PR Mace on Jan 15, 2011
Yes, I knew I had read it.

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