A group of friends stumble upon a adbanded amusement park.

Brian and his sis (Sam) are driving to the diner when Brian ask his sister to call Britney and have her meet at the diner to talk about the trip

CUT…TO

EXT. BRITNEY”S – HOUSE

Britney is on her parent’s deck talking to Sam on the phone

Sam

Hey can you meet us at the diner

Britney

Yeah but for why

Sam

So we can plan the trip

Britney

Yeah I will be there in a little bit after I talk to my dad

Sam

Ok later

Britney

Bye

CUT…TO

INT. BRIAN’S – JEEP

Sam hangs up phone

Sam

Well Britney is on her way what about your dick-head friends

Brian

Well if you really want to be a bitch about it I’ve already talked to the rest of the crew this morning and they’ll probably beat us to the diner

Sam

Alright dipshit cut back on the insults would ya I’m only coming on this trip to get out of the lovely Hell we call home and to party down

Brian

(Jokingly)

And get laid

Sam

Not by one of your asshole friends I heard Brandon’s hung like a fuckin’ fly

Brian

Besides the fact that you would know, I don’t want to

CUT…TO

EXT. BRITNEY’S HOUSE – DECK

Britney relaxes in a chase-lounge her father (Trav) exits the house out of a sliding glass door and plops down in a patio chair next to her he is sipping a mixed drink

Trav

I just came to the conclusion that you may need some cash on this trip with your friends so…

Trav reaches into his side pocket and pulls out a stuffed envelope

Trav

I got you a present consider this a graduation gift from your mother and I now before you say anything I want you to know that I was young once too and I know how exciting it can be to finally be able to make your own decisions and move out into the world BUT I also know how this twisted little world works SO don’t spend all this in one place and…

Britney

…And blah, blah blah I know dad I know how to be in control and I will be safe on this trip and probably for the rest of my life the way mom likes to always smother me

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