Friendship

fmakeita on Nov 26, 2009

Tags: bright, by your side, fragile, friendship, happy, real friend, rich or poor, Sphere, treasure, True Friend

How True Friendship is.

Friendship is like a treasure,

so hard to find,

harder to leave behind & would never be forgotten.

Friendship is like a crystal sphere.

Once you get hold of it,

you should hold it real tight,

you should not let it fall.

‘Cause this sphere of friendship is so fragile & too precious to break.

If you ever make a mistake of breaking the sphere,

it would shatter into so many pieces which would be quite hard to put it back together.

Even though you try hard to put it back together,

no matter what you do,

it would never be the same as before.

A true friend is not the person you hang out with,

have fun & be happy in the end of the day.

A true friend is the person who makes you feel up when you are feeling down,

who makes your day bright when you feel it’s dark.

When you’re mad,

a true friend cools you down & make things right.

No matter how rich or poor you are,

no matter how happy or sad you are,

a real friend will always be by your side.

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diamondpoet on Nov 27, 2009
I agree a true friend is a rare thing, thanks for sharing.
fmakeita on Nov 28, 2009
Your welcome
Themax on Nov 30, 2009
Yes wonderful poem,friends are precious and that’s true
fmakeita on Nov 30, 2009
drelayaraja on Dec 1, 2009
Great one. Keep writing..
lonewolf13 on Dec 1, 2009
very good poem. very insightful. You do know the true definition of a true friend.
fmakeita on Dec 2, 2009
Well life showed me what friendship really is and showed me who our true friends are. It somehow hurt a bit knowing who aren’t.
PhoenixRox on Dec 4, 2009
I am so glad we started the POETRY CLUB on Triond:
“http://writinghood.com/online-writing/poetry-lovers-writers-and-non-writers-join-poets-club-on-triond/ ”
Else I would never have been to read ur wonderful work. You have beautifully expressed what real friendship is. God bless u hun.
I hope this does not look spammy. I am hoping some new people will read this and join our POETRY CLUB.
fmakeita on Dec 4, 2009
Aww… Thanks. May God Bless you for this work your doing and make it easy. You help poets to be noticed and that\’s something.
Christine Ramsay on Dec 6, 2009
You are so right. true friends are rare and should be treasured. A beautiful and well written piece.

Christine
PhoenixRox on Dec 6, 2009
I am back.spreading the message and loving your piece some more.lol
CLUB at: http://bit.ly/5Mu6wf
trios2009 on Dec 6, 2009
That was a poem of truth! True friends are very hard to find and once you do find one, never let go!
AlmaG on Dec 6, 2009
That was a very nice poem of friendship… I love it
Christine Ramsay on Dec 8, 2009
I give you another like it.
fmakeita on Dec 9, 2009
Thank you all so much. Your votes and comments mean a lot to me. It encourage me a lot to write more than I used.
simplyoj on Dec 12, 2009
People do come and go in your life, only real friends will stay at the end when all gone out.

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