About some of what I go through to read my friends’ articles and poems. What do you go through? Or can you just spit it out type it up in a split second?

I am so hot in here, this room feels like a sauna.

I come in here to hide and get away for a little piece of mind! I pull my hair up into a pony tail style and even turn on the fan.

But to my amaze sweat roll down forehead! Its so hot I can hardly breath. Where is the ice water, give me some please!!!

Panting like a dog, I drag myself to the refrigerator and dig for some ice.

NO ICE!!!

Ahhh!

My tongue is hanging out and swiveling up! Help me please! Water, water, just a little bit of water, to cool my hot body off. With what energy I had left, I stumbled to the kitchen faucet with a cup in hand. Turned the faucet to the cold water direction, but

NO water!

Someone help me!

I am so hot!

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Comments (9)
  • Darla Cooke on Jun 2, 2009

    I really like this one a lot and the pictures with it are great.

  • nekkoli on Jun 2, 2009

    I likey, reminds me of my aunt’s Boxer Petey…..the thirstiest dog on the planet…..lol!

  • csaaphill on Jun 2, 2009

    Lol I like the snow cabin good pic enjoyed the story thanks.ftvkp

  • Blaccluv on Jun 2, 2009

    I have never read something like this very nice a kind of funny great work!!!

  • California Dreamer on Jun 3, 2009

    Nicely done and the photos went perfect with it :)

  • POLLIANNA on Jun 4, 2009

    I like it
    Made me thirsty x

  • Bick Parker on Jun 6, 2009

    Certainly different; kind of poetic in a way. Have you ever considered a Nanorobotic Heat Reducing Gene injection to lower your body temperature? I’m certain it would help …

  • Geomorphosis on Jun 6, 2009

    Very nice. The pictures are awesome too.

  • Poetic Enigma on Jun 18, 2009

    This is different and unique,
    I enjoyed this read

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