I Don’t Cry When I receive beautiful encouraging comments, tears of joy naturally flow down my eyes ,but I don’t cry.

I don’t cry
 
As soon as I
Open my profile
Tears flow down my eyes.
I don’t cry that I know
Yet how do tears
So naturally flow.
 
My love is in my heart
With all of you I share,
So do never me

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With a face almost like
The crescent of
The new moon,
Will look
Like if,
One
Had
To
Have
One,
Taken
Right away
By some one,
A millionaire perhaps,
Away in a space-ship, really big,
Right away to now, which is a full moon?
 
Anyone else compares.
 
Tears of joy continue to flow
Let them flow
Let them flow
Let them flow.
 
These tears are of toil
By now you all know.
 
 
 
 

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Comments (10)
  • Precious Illusions on Mar 18, 2010

    wonderful words…

  • Michael Eboh on Mar 18, 2010

    Interesting read. Thanks LOVELY HONEY.

  • ashan1614 on Mar 18, 2010

    The tears seem to know when they are needed…..

  • wonder on Mar 18, 2010

    Wow! lets navigate along these tears, three cheers!

  • Mary Patricia Bird on Mar 18, 2010

    Interesting write.

  • Wordcrafter on Mar 18, 2010

    Another beautiful write from you as usual. Your creativity is inspiring.

  • 8Shei8 on Mar 18, 2010

    An unusual but great write!

  • cardy on Mar 18, 2010

    You always write in an amazing way you keep me coming back for more a lovely write once more.

  • petercurtis97 on Mar 18, 2010

    very sweet thanks for sharing those inner thoughts

  • Kakraba Afful on Mar 18, 2010

    beautiful, writing, smart rhythm from line 16 to 21

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