Making love without knowing for sure it’s your partner,when the passion and excitement of not knowing takes over…

           “Imagine”

I come up from behind you,
and I pin you to your bed
I keep you from seeing my face,
a pillow slightly covers your head

I utter not one word,
my breath is my only sound
You are not sure if it is me
your hands I have now bound

You feel my lips as they start to explore,
slowly you give into desire
You are still unsure if it’s me,
but I have ignited your inner fire

You feel my mouth as it tastes your hips,
my fingertips they outline your skin
Your body starts to become more relaxed,
this is a struggle you don’t want to win

The warmth of my breath is what you feel,
as my mouth brushes along your backside
Suddenly you feel the rythym of my tongue
as it explores you deep inside

Your body jerks,you clench your fists
and you start to gyrate your hips
This just feels too damn good
with your tongue,you lick your own lips

Your breath it becomes heavy
you feel your thighs become wet
You tell me to take you now
and I whisper…”No not just yet”

My voice it excites you
you let out a slight moan
But was that me that you heard
your excitement grows with the unknown

You take a deep breath
your heart,it’s beating out of your chest
Then suddenly you feel me entering you
I will let your imagination finish the rest…

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Comments (22)
  • Heloni Lynn on Mar 10, 2011

    Another steamy masterpiece – well done <3

  • CHIPMUNK on Mar 10, 2011

    A great piece of work well done!!!!

  • Kristina on Mar 10, 2011

    Nice work

  • Joe Vizzacco on Mar 10, 2011

    @Loni ty,I’m glad you enjoyed it…@Chipmunk ty it’s nice to hear someone appreciates my work…@Kristina ty for the complement

  • adicodrean1967 on Mar 10, 2011

    nice share

  • Xandine on Mar 10, 2011

    Woot, now that’s erotic poetry. I admit I keep the best stuff for my gf. :-)

  • alexgadd on Mar 10, 2011

    Very nice work, thank you for sharing.

  • Antonello on Mar 10, 2011

    Liked it – 2

  • quiet voice on Mar 10, 2011

    Quite an imagination. Hot one!

  • iva75cpb on Mar 10, 2011

    This is even better and suits me more. Good work!

  • DR.VNS on Mar 11, 2011

    Very nice. Are you leaving it to our imagination?

  • Joe Vizzacco on Mar 11, 2011

    @adicodrean1967 ty…@Dave,yes I’ve actually toned some of my work down lol,my gf has seen some of my more erotic pieces lol… @alex ty for the comment…@Antonello,I’m glad you enjoyed it… @quiet voice lol,yes I have a very active imagination, I have to omit lines from time to time because they are just too much ;-) … @iva75cpb glad this works for you,it is a little titillating if I do say so myself ;-) …@DR.VNS good question,that was the plan,but maybe you just gave me an intro to “Imagine” what happens next hmmm let me ponder that idea and possibly look for that in the near future ty for the input and direction…

  • adicodrean1967 on Mar 11, 2011

    nice post

  • Nikita Phadke on Mar 11, 2011

    I likey! :D

  • john smither on Mar 12, 2011

    Great poem, a bit of mystery and leaving plenty to the imagination.

  • FX777222999 on Mar 12, 2011

    My imagination’s soaring high..Great poem friend!

  • nickwwe233 on Mar 12, 2011

    Good Work Joe

  • Mary Patricia Bird on Mar 12, 2011

    LOL! Love it… now where’s my husband? ;)

  • Joe Vizzacco on Mar 13, 2011

    @Nikita ty for reading…@John ty and yes it does lol…@FX lol that was the plan to leave each reader with their own fantasy ending lol…
    @nick ty glad you enjoyed…@Mary lol,your husband will thank me lol ;-)

  • Peace Poet on Mar 14, 2011

    “Imagine” is a remarkable romantic poem. Romanticism is “addition of strangeness to beauty”. This definition is truly applicable to this remarkable poem by Joe Vizzacco.

  • petercurtis97 on Mar 15, 2011

    Interesting I never have seen such work in this place before. Erotic piece I see.

  • dazedromantic on Mar 17, 2011

    Wow, omg awesome!!!

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