Love… a strange thing…

Immortals Among Us

    You know how you get excited on that first day of senior year in high school?  Well I’m not like that, or at least I wasn’t before.  My name is Amy Turner and I’m 18 years old. Here is my story.

                                          Immortals Among Us

                                     Chapter 1                

                              That Look

               “Wake up, wake up,” the alarm clock buzzes.                       “Shut up” I groan.  I get up from bed and get dressed in my usual; tank top, sweat pants and hoodie.  I brush my teeth and comb my dark brown hair until it’s covering most of my face.  Ever since fifth grade I’ve been the biggest loser in school. 

                     On the first day of fifth grade I was chewing gum.  That’s when Tasha backed up into the huge bubble exploding from my mouth.  Bye, bye long hair.  Hello buzz cut. 

       Tasha has spent years trying to get back at me.          

                                                            Immortals Among Us

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  • Sheila Barnhill on Apr 1, 2011

    Excellent job but you might want to upload one this long in parts instead of all at one time. Just a suggestion.

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