Love… a strange thing…

              “My boyfriend and your boyfriend are about to kill each other.”

              We rush over to them and pull them away from each other.

              “Stop it!” we both say at the same time.

              “Jake I’m fine. He was just lonely.  Now he’s not anymore.”  We turn around to see Matt and Amanda drive away.  “That was quick.”  We both laugh as I say that.  “All problems I hope are gone.” I say.

              Then right after I say that he places a kiss on my lips.  “Me too.”  He says in a quiet voice.

                                                           Immortals Among Us

                                Chapter 30

                             Am I Dead

              It’s the last five minutes of school and Jake has this look on his face that made me wonder what he was thinking about.  I cleared my mind so hard and thought of Jake to see if I could read his mind.  I read everything, but for some reason I couldn’t get out.  It was so scary was I stuck. I tried to clear my mind but nothing worked.  I started to feel myself return to normal.  This wasn’t normal. 

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  • Sheila Barnhill on Apr 1, 2011

    Excellent job but you might want to upload one this long in parts instead of all at one time. Just a suggestion.

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