Love… a strange thing…

              Out of nowhere Jake came behind me and says, “Finally you’re awake.” He laughs. 

              “Thanks.  I mean for the wall and the rest of my room.”  I walked over and looked in the closet and there was a note next to the new clothes.

                                                    Immortals Among Us

Dear Amy.

       Your wardrobe sucks so I got

you new clothes for you.  Enjoy the

new boyfriend.  Love you and

see you soon.

                Sincerely,

                   Ally

                                                        Immortals Among Us

              I started to laugh.  That’s when Jake hands me a box that has a purple bow on it.  I open it to see that it held a ring with our names carved into it.  It was almost like the one I dreamed about.  Good thing it wasn’t the same or I would have faint.  I knew that this relationship was not a dream it was real.  I know where I belong now.  This Jake is the one I love, and hopefully the one I will always love.

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  • Sheila Barnhill on Apr 1, 2011

    Excellent job but you might want to upload one this long in parts instead of all at one time. Just a suggestion.

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