Love… a strange thing…

              “You’re not paying for it.  I am.” She smiled even more.

              “Can’t turn down an offer like that.  Lets get shopping!” 

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              After we picked about a wardrobe to fill walk-in closet, we still didn’t have a dress.  Ally starts picking out about 20 dresses.  But only one catches my eye.  It is purple and white lace with a black sequin flower pattern.  Of course, it is the most expensive dress in the store.  Ally encourages me to try it on.  Dare I say that I look a little pretty?  With a tear in her eye Ally tells me I look like mom.             

              After Ally and I are done with shopping we have lunch.  We have Chinese food just like we use to when we were little.  I don’t really remember what I use to get so I had Ally order for me.  The cashew chicken was delicious and we shared fortune cookies.  We talk and talk until it got late.             

              Ally came back to my house with me we got busy and threw away almost half of my hoodies and sweat pants.  As we put everything new away she makes plans

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  • Sheila Barnhill on Apr 1, 2011

    Excellent job but you might want to upload one this long in parts instead of all at one time. Just a suggestion.

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