Into Your Lake

Lady Sunshine on Mar 26, 2010

Tags: Desire, dip, drenched, drop, lake, love, needs, Swirling, taste, tenderness, want

I step into you, washing over me.

I step into your lake
My heart stirred from within
As waves ripple over me
Washing away sorrows
As I bend and dip
Surrounded by your embrace
Streams of water cascading
Upon my bare skin
Drowning me in tenderness
A drop touches my lips
Dripping upon my tongue
I taste you
Swirling uncontrollably
Drinking you in
Saturated with want
Drenched in desire
Soaking me to the core
Stroking my needs
Taking me away
Upon love’s crest

Image by FreeWine via Flickr

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Adam Henry Sears on Mar 26, 2010
Well, I like that a lot. You have good imagery and flow. I think you should bring together some lines and separate others, but overall you did a good job. Thanks for sharing, and have a good day.
Atanacio on Mar 26, 2010
Sunshine this was so clever and creative well done
Sourav on Mar 26, 2010
Good poem… well constructed.
bailieman on Mar 26, 2010
Great imagery in a fine romantic poem.
giftarist on Mar 26, 2010
Love the visual, milady.
Shirley Shuler on Mar 26, 2010
Hi Lady Sunshine, this is another creative poem by you, loved the imagery, well done my friend!!
Christine Ramsay on Mar 27, 2010
You have created wonderful images through this poem. Lovely work.

Christine
8Shei8 on Apr 2, 2010
Wish I could swim in that lake. Beautiful write Lady Sunshine
deep blue on Apr 4, 2010
A love wish fulfilled, careful lines well laid.
LOVELYHONEY on Apr 7, 2010
nice very nice the lake well u give me an idea of writing on

a well
LoveDoctor on Apr 11, 2010
This is a masterpiece. The imagery is awesome.

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