Is This any Good?

Lady Sunshine on Oct 4, 2009

Tags: appreciated, comments, Fan Fiction, feedback, help, Opinion, story, thank you, writer, Writing

Your opinion would be appreciated.

Being an amateur writer, I am continually trying to improve each time I write. There are certain pieces that I have written that I like more than others. One such piece is “Take Me Away”. It was written in September of 2008. This was my first fictional story I did for Triond, and a sentimental favorite of mine, for various reasons. But is it any good?? I received three like-its but zero comments, so I have absolutely no idea. Since my opinion doesn’t count, I would appreciate any feedback from it. I apologize for the length. Before Triond changed servers, it used to be two separate pages, but now is clumped into one. Ugh.

Here is the link: Take Me Away

Once again I appreciate whatever feedback I can get! I would like to do more pieces like this, but only if I am competent enough. Thank you for your time!

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Comments (10)

Papa Sparks on Oct 4, 2009
Read my comments at the end of the story.
agriculi on Oct 4, 2009
Very clever.
ken bultman on Oct 4, 2009
There are no writers on Triond worthy of judging others’ works. If you liked the story then it was good. I liked it a lot.
deep blue on Oct 4, 2009
I like it a lot too. When I was in the Philippines I watched korean telenovelas on TV.
Sourav on Oct 4, 2009
Interesting article!
Shirley Shuler on Oct 4, 2009
Hi Lady Sunshine, as you already know, I am a big fan of Mina and Hwang, and yes, “Take Me Away” is beautifully written. The Mina and Hwang romance is some of your best work. Is this any good, did you have to ask(smile), I am still waiting for more of Mina and Hwang!!!!
papaleng on Oct 5, 2009
What away to express your thoughts. I’ll try to see your post.
Jane Jane on Oct 5, 2009
that’s sure a nice one. if it’s written with emotions then it’s probably beautiful.
Lady Sunshine on Oct 5, 2009
Thanks to everyone who ACTUALLY took the time to read and comment on my STORY. Some people wouldn’t even bother and just comment on this piece only. Much appreciated.
martinpm on Oct 5, 2009
interesting one.!!!

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