Lost.

Do you ever feel so lost, like life is just an image in a mirror you see but can never fully be apart of, like things you once had have slipped thru your fingers like smoke in the wind. So hard to catch your breath, so hard to feel anything but darkness inside.

Do you ever feel like the end is so near and yet have no idea how it comes, where you hide in the shadows to keep the real you from ever being known, to stay just a step behind the rest of the world being scoffed at while wondering how it happened?

Do you ever thing that you have accomplished all you can in this life and look at it then see its meaningless, that nothing you have every done will ammount to anything? Thinking back on the past, on all of your hopes and dreams, now seeing how they have slowly faded into nothing…

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  • meandu on Dec 15, 2009

    I had to reread this a couple of times because I could not believe how you have captured how I feel most of the time these days. Thank you for sharing.

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 15, 2009

    WONDERFUL WRITING……

  • BGWriter on Dec 16, 2009

    I understand exactly what you’re saying. I’ve been there so many times; I think I never left. Beautiful writing!

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