Not even death can quell love’s dark obsession.

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You walk with me
You talk with me
You envelop my senses
Consuming me
I gaze up at the sky
Seeing your face
Captivating me
I am beholden to you
Overwhelmed by your ghost
You haunt me
In my every waking moment
And every sleepless night
I yearn for you
Like a sunflower
That reaches for the sun
Hungry for its kiss
Take me now
Into the depths of your soul
Take me to where you are now
Heaven or hell
I need you like the air that I breathe
I am incomplete without you
Comeback to me
Break free from death’s embrace
And into my arms
Stay with me
Stay forever
My one true obsession

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  • drelayaraja on Jan 26, 2010

    Wonderful write. I enjoyed very much :)

  • Guy Hogan on Jan 26, 2010

    This poem puts me in a trance. Line flows into line. This really is about obsession. PS I was wondering. You have,”I am incomplete with you.” Did you mean to write, “I am incomplete without you”? Just checking.

  • ken bultman on Jan 26, 2010

    Eerily passionate plea into the fourth dimension. Beautiful poetic example of eternal love.

  • raman13 on Jan 26, 2010

    Marvelous

    Best Regards

  • johnnydod on Jan 26, 2010

    you are my sunshine my lady

  • Atanacio on Jan 26, 2010

    This poem was done perfectly :)

  • Atanacio on Jan 26, 2010

    I really enjoyed this poem it was done perfectly

  • Nitin Mudgal on Jan 26, 2010

    Nice words

  • T. S. Lewis on Jan 26, 2010

    Heaven or Hell, very few are willing to go to the later. Having a special some one that is willing to do that is an amazing thing. I hope the person you were writing this about is still here loving you like heaven

  • Reilley on Jan 26, 2010

    Very nice, evocative and plainly emotional. Nice flow.

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 26, 2010

    A very well written poem of yearning. Well done.

    Christine

  • willie wondka on Jan 26, 2010

    great poem, love your picture to.

  • bailieman on Jan 26, 2010

    Beautifully expressed longing for the unattainable.

  • AlmaG on Jan 26, 2010

    Another beautiful masterpiece ^_^

  • Shirley Shuler on Jan 26, 2010

    Hi Lady Sunshine, such a beautiful poem of yearning for the unattainable. The picture is perfect.

  • giftarist on Jan 27, 2010

    I can make a tune out of this piece. Really great :D

  • deep blue on Jan 27, 2010

    Be careful what you pray for. Nice lines however dark it is.

  • Stan Wilson on Feb 2, 2010

    lovely poem well done

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