Nobody like him.

He was what you considered average-looking. He was not very tall. He was middle-aged. He wasn’t rich, working on a teacher’s salary. Everything about him seemed unremarkable and ordinary. But he had a fighting spirit like no other. He would fight for you, defending your honor. He worked hard, giving everything of himself. He was an honest man with a noble heart. He wasn’t ordinary or unremarkable to me. He’s the man I love. He protects me. He is always there for me. His earnestness endears me, touches me, a man of no pretenses. He gives me such hope, such joy. He gives me happiness I never thought possible. He loves me like no other. Nothing compares to him. Nothing.

Images from: www.vgmuseum.com/end/arcade/b/rsskyo.htm

Earnest and honest
And hardworking, too.
There is no other man
Quite like you.
You give me love.
You give me joy.
No other man
Can compare to you.
Mr. Ordinary?
I think not!
In my eyes
You are just too hot!

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  • drelayaraja on Feb 3, 2010

    Hot hot and hot…

  • giftarist on Feb 3, 2010

    Wow, great composition milady. Well done.

  • Atanacio on Feb 3, 2010

    Just write the damn book you are good at these types of writings.. I think conversational writings? but nevertheless you are a great story-teller! :)

  • Guy Hogan on Feb 3, 2010

    Sounds like a great guy to me. Congratulations on the creative use of the graphics in the piece. I love a happy ending.

  • T. S. Lewis on Feb 3, 2010

    Words that will make him stand proud

  • cassandra evangelista on Feb 3, 2010

    Loved it :)

  • Val Mills on Feb 3, 2010

    That’s nice.

  • 8Shei8 on Feb 3, 2010

    I find your Mr. Ordinary extremely sexy. Hard to find a good man like that :)

  • Shirley Shuler on Feb 3, 2010

    Hi Lady Sunshine, he sounds like a good man to me and I love a happy ending.

  • VTech on Feb 3, 2010

    Great Post

  • Marie Antoinette on Feb 3, 2010

    This is really cute. I love it.

  • deep blue on Feb 3, 2010

    Well done, Kyoko umm I mean LS. I like the ending. Kyoko passed out in Hideo’s arms.

  • AlmaG on Feb 3, 2010

    It’s a fun read :)

  • Kris Tagre on Feb 3, 2010

    reaallly nice (”,)

  • metro7 on Feb 3, 2010

    Such ppl do exist nice & true wordings thxs for the share.i love the graphics too.

  • papaleng on Feb 4, 2010

    I thought you are describing me..LOL A very entertaining write.

  • Stan Wilson on Feb 4, 2010

    he’s no ordinary man hes an extraordinary man,very good write up here …choice…

  • lillyrose on Feb 4, 2010

    this was so, so lovely!

  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 4, 2010

    Very Nice….

  • Melody SJAL on Feb 6, 2010

    Truly a nice read…great illustrations too.

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