This is an creative writing about my first time going to Beijing.
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My Beijing Trip!

This is how I wrote it when i just came back!

OH MY GOD!! I just came back from China-Beijing, it was amazing with all the sightseeing. I have lots to tell you.

The first day there was fine weather, I was walking with my parents when suddenly, I saw all these people, across the streets (it’s like 2,000 people on each street!)

Anyway, I wanted to tell you about the sightseeing, I went to most of the places such as The Great Wall, Forbidden City, Tian An Men Square, Bird Nest, Water Cube, Temple of Heaven and The Summer palace! etc. But out of all of then I liked the Great Wall best because it’s really big, really long and beautiful! When I looked down, it was SO steep! And I bet it is good for exercise!

The Beijing trip was GREAT!!!How about next time? We will go to Hong Kong?

Thank You for reading!!!

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