This is a story about my favourite type of dog.

My favourite dog is a golden retriever, i started liking this dog when i was three.  Ever sence i really wanted to get ond until one day my brothers got alergic to them. That was one of the worts days of my life, Zll the time every day i would beg beg beg.  But every day i got the same answer, and again and again and again.  The next day i found out my best friend had one, so i beged and beged to go to his house.  The next week my best friend mooved to a different country,  “Mom why didn’t you tell me?!”   “Well because if I did you would beg until i say yes.”   Fine!!! he said.  Later that week, it was show and tell day.  One of the kids in class brought a dog!  could it be, could it be my second sight of a. . . .  IT IS I shouted

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  • Max on May 4, 2009

    That was very good i think you will make alot of money of of that one!!!

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