My Greatest Illusion

Francy on Jul 6, 2009

Tags: forget, greastest illusion, love, loving you, my love, won't stop

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Click on it….

You ask me to forget you

but i have a heart

that its still pounding for you

hoping for your love.

I was born to love you

and that is my greatest illusion.

Wont stop loving you,

I swear to you by my love.

You are my greatest illusion.

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Comments (7)

Tito on Jul 6, 2009
nice pic
Darla Cooke on Jul 6, 2009
Lovely poem and pic.
Amanda N Miller on Jul 6, 2009
Wow! This is so wonderful!
Deep Blue on Jul 7, 2009
Truly romantic lines.
J L Williams on Jul 7, 2009
Short, sweet, to the point…delightful effort!
Tanya Wallace on Jul 7, 2009
A lovely, heartfelt romantic poem.Great work Francy.Keep them comin.Tanya
livemike on Jul 9, 2009
A heartfelt piece full of hope and emotion…It is not easy lettimg go …

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