This is a description on my vision of a perfect community.

 

Government

  1. People within the community will send in ideas for rules then later vote on the ones they like. If you break the rules you are hung by your feet by a vine 50 feet in the air if the vine breaks you fall.
  2. Some of our laws and rules are no lighting fires, you cannot leave the community, and you must be fully clothed in a public place.
  3. We will decide on leadership by choosing a royal family.
  4. The rules will be enforced by being hung by a vine on your foot if the vine breaks you will drop 50 feet in the air.

Education System

  1. Our education system is gym, religion, wood working, math, music, science
  2. Our education system is specifically for our community every subject is important
  3. Ages 10-20 will attend
  4. Everything in our system is all that u need for our community and there are less years in school

Employment

  1. Wood working: To build the houses, schools, factory, buildings.
  2. Janitor: To clean up all messes within the community and take care of the trading.
  3. Trainer: To train soldiers for war.
  4. Scientist: For research to make the community safer and more technologically advanced.
  5. Mathematicians: For measuring wood for cuts.

The people choose what they want to do then people that are more experienced will train the new people.

Money

  1. 1 Joy, 2 Joys, 5 Joys, 10 Joys, 20 Joys, 50 Joys,75 Joys, 100 Joys, 500 Joys, 1000 Joys
  2. People earn more money for certain jobs. Our dollar is worth 10 more dollars then the Canadian dollar.
  3. All medical issues and products will be free of charge to our people

Communication/Outside Influences

  1. We trade with Showers Sity. We also make our own food from trees and animals.
  2. No visitors are allowed in our city the only people that leave are our Janitors to do some trading

Citizen Responsibilities

  1. No graffiti, no littering, no leaving, must be home before 12 am, no lighting fires
  2. Children become adults at the age of 13

Transportation

  1. Hover board, swinging on vines, bridges
  2. All of our transportation sucks in pollution and transforms it into fresh air

Recreation/Entertainment

  1. People in our community will play football, basketball, soccer
  2. We will provide sports, tag, hide and go seek for the children and teens
  3. Adults will talk and play poker or sports for entertainment
  4. The elderly will listen to old music or talk for entertainment.
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  • Author on Jan 3, 2008

    Thanks for reading i know its just a fun thought :D

  • Neil Nacierema on Jun 22, 2008

    wow, what a community. My favorite part is the education of the children, and the people who get hung on fifty foot vines if they break the laws. But I am curious as to why new technology was a priority under employment? It appears in this homely community of yours in which citizens don’t leave, change would be avoided and rather love and family are stressed. New technology changes the entire community and social institutions that sustained it, sometimes for the better sometimes for the worse; yet I don’t think you will be able to uphold the tradition that you started your community in with changing technology as is present in the society of the United States.

  • Author on Aug 3, 2008

    The only technology being fabricated in the United States are those weapons which harm innocent people everyday… Look on the back of every piece of technology you have most likely has made in china written on the back…

  • Ray on Jan 13, 2009

    ughh very unappealling D:

  • Tony on Feb 22, 2009

    I’m writing a paper of my perfect community. My teacher gave us this assignment based off the book and movie, The Lottery.

  • Sonja on Mar 3, 2009

    kewl… my teacher is maken us reasurch wht people want in a perfect world or community…. it is boring :P

  • UrBffForeva on Mar 5, 2009

    Ya. I in da same class as sonja. we gotta find the advantages n disadvantages of a “perfect world”. HELP MEE!!!!

  • Sonja on Mar 5, 2009

    i think the 13 year old i good for if u r 13 lol…. but bad if the communtiy has depend on us… we might all die of to much awesomeness :]

  • blitz on Mar 27, 2009

    ARE YOU A CANADIEN!!!!??!?!!?!?!?!?

  • wrfwrfwe on Sep 30, 2010

    Men you are so stupid.

  • Nick Sto on Oct 19, 2010

    Please don’t talk to yourself on my article page

  • YourKnowledgeTimesTen on Feb 21, 2013

    Haha, dude some crazy ideas, you flog. Dumb how you said that all poeple become adults at 13 and then seperated teens and adults later, your currency sounds gay. Dude, develop some better opinions. You also need an English class not just for your make-believe education system, also for your dumb brain. And what if people are different religon? How’s that class going to go? You hurt my brain you dumbass. I wana hang you from a vine and drop you 50 feet, then laugh. Ha. Explains why you’re canadian. How the bajesus are you going to get hoverboards.

  • GeniusMan66 on Feb 21, 2013

    Haha, dude some crazy ideas, you flog. Dumb how you said that all poeple become adults at 13 and then seperated teens and adults later, your currency sounds gay. Dude, develop some better opinions. You also need an English class not just for your make-believe education system, also for your dumb brain. And what if people are different religon? How\\\’s that class going to go? You hurt my brain you dumbass. I wana hang you from a vine and drop you 50 feet, then laugh. Ha. Explains why you\’re canadian. How the bajesus are you going to get hoverboards.

  • I'mSmart666 on Feb 21, 2013

    Haha, dude some crazy ideas, you flog. Dumb how you said that all poeple become adults at 13 and then seperated teens and adults later, your currency sounds gay. Dude, develop some better opinions. You also need an English class not just for your make-believe education system, also for your dumb brain. And what if people are different religon? How\\\\\\\’s that class going to go? You hurt my brain you dumbass. I wana hang you from a vine and drop you 50 feet, then laugh. Ha. Explains why you\\\’re canadian. How the bajesus are you going to get hoverboards.

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