My Sweetest Friend

Poetic Enigma on Jul 8, 2009

Tags: addiction, guess, hurt, loss, My sweetest friend, once upon a time, pain, Poetry, run away, Where have you gone

Think you know who, or what my sweetest friend is? You may not have a clue.

Where have you gone,
My sweetest friend?
We were so close,
Once upon a time.
Time seems to have changed you.
Will you ever come back to me?
I have to wonder.
Where have you run,
So far away?
I’m still waiting for the day,
When you will say,
That you are coming back to stay.
Where do you hide?
Away from me?
My heart in the dirt.
When will you say,
That you are coming back to stay?
Where have you gone,
My sweetest friend?

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goodselfme on Jul 8, 2009
delightful poem with really smooth flow.
Amanda N Miller on Jul 8, 2009
Nice piece.
Pravuil on Jul 9, 2009
I like this. I’ll add, sometimes the things we are looking for are right where we left them.
Trinitaria on Jul 9, 2009
It is a really good poem. You use simple words, but your words said a lot about this friend. I enjoyed reading it.
Will Gray on Jul 9, 2009
Excellent! I would guess, from knowing your writing for so long, that your sweetest friend is you.
ellenhart on Jul 9, 2009
I really liked this, it made me think of past times.
HatedNation on Jul 10, 2009
nice
Johanny Lisbeth on Jul 10, 2009
beautiful!! really touching, you must have a muse.
S A JOHNSON on Jul 31, 2009
I can totally relate!

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