It is insane. Imagination is the key to reality.

The barren land was ablaze with such heat, that the wind itself seemed to be made from fire, snapping at my clothes and viciously licking my skin, releasing a staggering aura over me, like everything was ablaze, frightening me, for I had no idea where I was, trapped in a godforsaken wasteland, so desolate, so disturbed, so depleted, that the land itself seemed worn-out, almost tired with the many acts of war that had conducted on it. It seemed an endless, an infinite, lost land of ancient bones and blood that eradicated everything within my view of a hundred miles worth of nothing but ugliness, and the occasional attack of the wind, the song of a thousand long lost voices which eradicated every sound that emanated from every force, and, this frightened me senseless. To not be able to recognize what lay before me, to not be able to know what could occur in the next second, to not be able to re-position my legs elsewhere, was a curse that eliminated every bright sensation blazing in my mind, along with the sun attacking my eyes, using arrows of blinding light, rays of constant bright intensity, melting the very souls that formed my sight. So many thoughts ricocheted along the walls of my head; erupting screams that I couldn’t ignore, but what made me tense, was that it was unbelievably real, and I was almost positive that I was dreaming, but now, a sense of sudden dread rushed over me, for reality is as unpredictable as time itself. I felt like I could touch the sun, or the heat radiating from it, and inhale its toxic heat, and touch its fire-emblazoned surface and know the true meaning of intense heat, for anything in this place seemed possible, and, maybe, find out why there were two moons, seeming to collide with the single sun. This hammered a drum within my heart, as a sudden sense of curiosity enlightened me, making me forget the blood-stained sky, making me ignore the pair of moons, making me feel as if I was standing on water, and, glancing down, I gasped, feeling suddenly enervated.

I was truly standing on water.

A second ago, if time exists in this unnatural world, I was standing on a pale red, rocky surface, and now, I am standing on what seemed to be bones, floating on the surface of water. My eyes drifted to the ripples formed when I gasped, watching the perfect circle, a mini wave, a small surge of energy confined in the water, along with a vicious wind, snarling and constantly attempting to raid my clothes, so that, suddenly, I felt weak, useless, annoyed and so confused that I seemed to be hyperventilating, the taste of bile in my mouth. My mind was in a lost tornado of thoughts, spinning wildly, screaming in the midst of my head, and what disturbed me, was from three words, dancing in my mind.

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  • Lewis006 on Jul 25, 2009

    Very nice i like it very interesting

  • lightooth on Jul 25, 2009

    thanks.

  • K.R.Fantasy on Jul 25, 2009

    This story is amazing, it has great description and very nice vocabulary. I liked it very much.

  • C00Ki3Z on Jul 25, 2009

    Great story! Loved it.

  • Pro thoughts on Jul 26, 2009

    This is absolutely fantastic! Im hoping to see more from the writer, and hoping to see an entire story! :)

  • The Mo12 on Jul 27, 2009

    WOW. How more creative can anyone get? :D

  • JR lincoln on Jul 27, 2009

    I cant believe the artist of this piece of work is only 15 years of age. A pure natural. A born creative writer.

  • Lewis006 on Jul 28, 2009

    HALLO my friend im am from paksitain i am reading this very good article about this movie very intresting. My naem is Raju balla G and i loving this article about this movie. if u live near bangledesh come look me up.

  • Johhn LinColN on Jul 31, 2009

    khi. My friend i too from paks. U paks too? i live near karachi darbar restaurant. U want come over my house we play Boldigrui? I lovings u. Oi’s mates. I say correct no? U from paks plox come to karachi darbar restaurant near muhaji banful. I lovings this article by ze way. Just lovings/likings dis.

  • CURRY BOY on Sep 29, 2009

    Umm.. the comments above are quite disturbing… Anyway, i thought this was very in-depth, i have never read something as good as this. I enjoyed it very much.

    Alex.

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