A small narrative essay I chosen to do.. tell me what u think about it.. be a critic lol thanx.

On the way to the amazing theme park, the child thought of all the amazing things that he would be able to do: the rides, the food, the events, the parks, and the fun attractions, and the biggest thing of all, an autograph from all of the characters that he knew from all the movies he watched. He was so into the thought of doing all of these things that he forgot about the rides. As soon as he jumped back into reality, he was already inside the park gate and the car was parked in the parking lot. It was amazing when he got out for he saw beautiful fireworks shooting from a castle that he has seen in many of the Disney movies. He was shocked in awe as he saw the amazing different colors soar across the sky above the castle and the magnificent ways the fireworks exploded. “That’s a moment to remember, son.” Father placed his hand on the Childs shoulder and they walked through the gates of the parks and then the child told him, “That’s not even the beginning of it.”

There was so much to remember, they first went to the Animal Kingdom and observed animals, took pictures, and watched videos of the history of the park and interesting attractions. The whole layout of the Magic Kingdom was made up of an environmental theme, with trees everywhere and birds chirping, and sounds of monkeys, sloths and other exotic animals. Around the Kingdom was a waterfall that was beautiful in sound, and was splashing mist all around the walkway and showing a beautiful rainbow across the yard. In Disney World there were four separate parks; Magic Kingdom, Animal Kingdom, Epcot, and Hollywood Studios. The child went to each and every one and each of the parks had something magical about the way each park ran. All in all, the child was super excited that he finally got to all the rides and said to his mom, “I guess the 2 hour ride up here was worth it.” The only thing the mother and father had to worry about was the ride back home.

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