death is iminent , enjoy … great creation

Beautiful poetry….

Luv it!

Beautiful. Sad. Honest. Qualities few writers can share.

beautiful words but a sad topic that all of us have to deal with!

Nice sharing. I like it.

Thanks for sharing.

Good words . Nice sharing.

Great

Death is inevitabale.

Everyone passes through these stages.

You should not think of future if it always grant you tears.

Live in present and try to smile.

It is the great way to live the life.

very nice

very good. you haven’t solved the puzzle,

Death is the beginning of your happiness.

Such sadness is felt when I read this. Very well written. Voted up.

very tragic… thanks for sharing.

It is really cool that you and Martin go back and forth with your little clues. And your little poems. He is in his 50’s. You are 16. That is niceee.

But what I wonder: Are you posting poems to match your pictures, or are you writing because you fear death? Is this, as a 16 year old what you are REALLY feeling?

Do you have friends? How come you have soooo much angst at such a young age? Reading your poems, you must have had about 3 or four relationships ending in tragedy since you were about 10. ????

FX777 writes “Death is the beginning of your happiness”
GOOOD GAWD! No it is the bloody he77 not! You are young, free, and just beginning life! You post things like “auspious” on people’s pages, yet you cannot coherently put sentences together on your poems? I don’t get it?

I may be BANNED for saying this, but here I go: I think you are a good writer, but if you are 16, and on here with a bunch of adults, and not out with kids your age, please—-go seek a writing group at your school. Go join a cooking group, go seek a depression group. And please quit playing puzzle games with people that want you to keep writing about death. And think that MORALITY poems are beautiful from a 16 year old.

I think it is sick.

Pffffft!

U JUST ROCK AUSHI!!!!!!!

@BlanWh I didn’t ask u what should I do.I will do what my heart says.U can’t stop me.Don’t teach me.

very very nice

I think BlandWh is simply interfering in others matter.

He don’t have the right to say what you should do.

If it was advice then it was acceptable one but that really doesn’t sounds so.

death is death itself and it ends there for you but for other people known you whether family, friend or love one your existence will be remembered 4evr.

This has really become a great conversation. For starters, she is showing talent way beyond her years. It is impressing. When we write poetry, we don’t always write about ourself or circumstances in our life. This is what seperated the pack. A good poet can take someone’s story and write it as their own. I have always said you are gifted and I will always stand behind you. You have to understand that this is art and so much more then words meaning something.

Thankx thelyyricwriter for supporting.

First, i am a married man. The big secret is a round I wrote for
Aroosagloomy. It is a demonstration piece, I think Aroosagloomy has poetic talent. many of Aroosagloomy’s poem, including this one, would have made stronger rounds, in my opinion.

dont worry aroosa people like BLANDWH r jealous of whatever u r n if u keep on going like dat soon the sky will kiss ur toes !!!!1just dont give them a damn!!!1u right trumendous!!!!!!

Thankx @Martin kloess and @Iqra

very good and sad too

Great share.

Wonderful dear

really very cool and you write it in a very good way..i like and lov it..no one is like you aroosa..proud of you sweetoooo

To Love
Someone Is To See
A Miracle Invisible To
Others

Thankx @ayub75:D

make your mind fly to see this work,, good job

@ aroosa i shall not comment on ant of ur links now!!!!!!!u want da same thing 2 happen ………right na??????:(

@Iqra I didn’t get ur drift what u wanna say.It’s ur choice.

Beautifully crafted and illustrated. In north east India tribal people cry when babies are born and rejoice when someone dies! There’s a beauty in death too.

@Chinmay Chakravatary I know death is beautiful I’m afraid cuz whom I love they will be far way from me.

I like it, cool one

Aroosa, I really like your poetry and your photos are so sophisticated that they scare an (aged) farm boy like me. But read a story I wrote about a boy and his dead dog. The title is Mortal Remains.

AmosTheCat

Aroosa, I really like your poetry and your photos are so sophisticated that they scare an aged farm boy like me. But read a story I wrote about a boy and his dead dog. The title is Mortal Remains.

AmosTheCat

nice.. good word..

Good poetess but too dark really.

Keep on writing I can only say that. Poetry comes from the heart and it is the best way to get things off your chest. Cheers

nice. excellentt

Be positive.

great share

nissssh arsi ! i feel i bit jealoused yara !!!!!!!!!! i ca n write poetry but not as good as u !
but u hve got the talent ! keep it up
better to become a writter then chef ………………just an advice .

@Aisha jammal.Oh! now I got to know why in class I use to daily smell like burning like coal.Oh it was u.lolzzz.Keep ur direction less advice with u.I’ll do what my heart says.U already know how I got fame in cooking every where but u never appreciated cuz u never tasted I guess.

A good one indeed

interesting share

good share

I Like It

such talent with awesome pics

nice one

Nice share..

Beautifully written

You are immortal with these wonderful poems.

Wow.. fantastic end! “Eat,drink and be merry for tomorrow we die.” That’s what my grandfather told me once. The important is to live the way you want to for the little time you have. It’s better to know we are all mortal.
Great share, thanks!