Bad gril, bad girl, what you gona to do, what you gona do when they come for you?

Can you keep a secret?

More of my slapped wrist bloomers from triond!

Am I just bad? I want to write. Yes articles are great but they stifle my creativity!

Can you keep a secret?

Please don’t tell

Can you keep a secret?

Or I go to hell

Can you keep a secret?……

I have once again produced work that is just to much for poor triond guidelines.

Once again I managed to present a master piece of gory horror that was just to gory for my own good.

It is a fairytale called “BLOOD LUST AND LITTLE DEAD RIDING HOOD” and while it may not be your normal run of the mill fairytale, I was aiming it at adults! adults who like a little blood and gore and most importantly the suspense! 

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  • cardy on Nov 4, 2009

    It sounds so good to love that pic with the wolf change a few things and get it published you have got me wanting to read it now!!!!

  • cardy on Nov 4, 2009

    It sounds so good to love that pic with the wolf change a few things and get it published you have got me wanting to read it now!!

  • cardy on Nov 4, 2009

    It sounds so good to love that pic with the wolf change a few things and get it published you have got me wanting to read it now!!

  • raman13 on Nov 4, 2009

    excellent

  • STEVE666 on Nov 4, 2009

    You can always try Bukisa, Lily.

  • Papa Sparks on Nov 4, 2009

    There’s probably a reason for that with the Google AdSense integration; Triond has to be more careful with the kind of posts they allow.

  • PhoenixRox on Nov 4, 2009

    I am glad you wrote this! I think you could definitely try Bukisa or Associated content

  • Themax on Nov 4, 2009

    Excellent great work :)

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 4, 2009

    Sounds like a story I’d love to read.

  • lillyrose on Nov 4, 2009

    Papa I don’t have google adsence on here, I know how fussy they are about content.

    I have changed a few words to see if it gets approved.

  • CaSundara on Nov 4, 2009

    Do you not have your own blog, lilyrose? It seems a shame to have to keep altering things.. At least then you could post one version here and another there (you could add a link to the “uncut” version once published).

  • ashan1614 on Nov 4, 2009

    You’ve got us all curious, so you have to find a way to get it published! :D

  • lillyrose on Nov 4, 2009

    Great Idea Cass and everyone. I do have a blog and a website but haven’t been on for awhile I may check that out, thankyou

  • diamondpoet on Nov 4, 2009

    Unfortunately we have to follow certain guidelines, thanks for sharing your story.

  • alc on Nov 4, 2009

    A great write! thanks for sharing this with all of us!

  • martinpm on Nov 4, 2009

    lillyrose, keep your spirits high, and do the most loved thing that we all do, PUBLISH.

  • Peter Cimino on Nov 4, 2009

    Your work is excellent. There are many places you can submit it too besides Triond. Just do a search for horror fiction magazines or web sites.

  • ken bultman on Nov 4, 2009

    The suspense is holding in my hand.

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 4, 2009

    I hope you get through this time. It sounds good.

    Christine

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 4, 2009

    so many have already read u

    how can i keep it a secret
    anymore

    u wanna me to spread it

    i will do for sure

  • Teves on Nov 4, 2009

    NIce article and photos…

  • petercurtis97 on Nov 4, 2009

    Good image lilyrose

  • Lostash on Nov 4, 2009

    You know my address……………..I’m waiting!!!

  • Frances Lawrence on Nov 4, 2009

    Well I like the picture, and maybe you can revise the story a bit so that we can all get to read it.

  • Tanya Wallace on Nov 4, 2009

    Can you change a few words Lilly? Cause by your ending I thought mememe,its intended for me lol Triond is annoying sometimes!!They publish somethings that shouldn’t be published and are complete garbage writing skills and the ones who do have the true skills suffer!They don’t like me much right now because of my complaining to them on various issues otherwise I would complain about this to!lol

  • Maxthevir on Nov 4, 2009

    Awesome piece!

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 4, 2009

    Maybe you can take a little gore out and it will be tame enough for Triond.

  • WriteEditSeek on Nov 5, 2009

    You rebel you . . . :) I’m always so intrigued by all your banned content. Maybe you could start a blog for all the banned Triond content. Now that would be interesting! You could post everything from all the Trionders who get rejected because they are outside the acceptable fray.

  • WriteEditSeek on Nov 5, 2009

    Just saw Cass’s comment . . . LOL. Seems we’re thinking along the same lines.

  • giftarist on Nov 5, 2009

    Thanks for sharing this.

  • Will Dee on Nov 5, 2009

    Nice creative write. Keep up the great work!

  • Duff D Moss on Nov 5, 2009

    Yes – know that story too well. There would be plenty here too that would be interested in a read of that article. This place really needs a content rating system.

  • Jane Jane on Nov 5, 2009

    sounds interesting.

  • neet on Nov 5, 2009

    Now, I want to read your story so bad………I hpe u can publish it right here.

  • redmail99 on Nov 5, 2009

    I like fairy tales, I like the suspense and I love the title:
    “BLOOD LUST AND LITTLE DEAD RIDING HOOD”

  • saritajain86 on Nov 6, 2009

    Great read. Thanks…

  • Frosty Johnson on Nov 7, 2009

    Blood, sex, wolves sounds good to me, post it on your own blog and put a link up in the forum

  • deep blue on Nov 7, 2009

    Excellent piece. You really are awesome.

  • T.Rex McGoogle on Nov 9, 2009

    Lillyrose, I enjoyed your short article about Little Dead Riding Hood. I’d like to have read more. But of the articles and such that I’ve read under your byline, I have always been interesting.

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