This is a story about a guy named Jimmy. his life is not so successful and you will see how when you read this story.

 

powdered jelly doughnut

 

On my way home, I was wondering what my report card would be when I check my mail. My name is Jimmy and I am a very worried kid. Most of the time I’m depressed in my room all day from exhaustion or I got a bad grade. Today is the day when I get the final grade that will lead me toward an even deeper stage of depression or become the happiest kid on the block.

 

When I got home, I checked my mail box and inside was my report card. I don’t know if I should be worried or excited, maybe both I don’t know. I was just about to rip the little envelope open and get it over with, when I suddenly saw a large looming shadow coming from my back yard. I walk over to the side of my house and cautiously peered into my backyard to see a little cave. At first I was surprised to see the cave because I’ve never seen it before; but then again the last time I was in my backyard was about a month ago so anything could happen.

 

I cautiously approach the cave, but jogging a little. Once I got to the mouth of cave he peered in and saw a powdered jelly doughnut in a dim spot light. I know that it could be a lure and I could get kidnapped but the powdered jelly doughnut was too hard to resist. As I approach the jelly doughnut, I remembered that powdered jelly doughnuts are the main staple in a hobos’ diet.

Then suddenly out of nowhere a hobo comes at me swinging from the rafters and mooches my doughnut right out of my hand. And even worse he took two of my fingers along with it! I started to scream but I was too angry about losing my delicious powdered jelly doughnut. Right then I vowed to get back that jelly doughnut; if he didn’t already eat it.

 

I foraged down the dim lighted corridor until I came upon a bright crossroad. The sign on the left read “Go left for any 3 wishes that you want

The second sign read “Go forward for your precious powdered jelly doughnut

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  • intahamar on Dec 1, 2010

    good story and im loving the ending ” thumbs up”

  • Adam on Dec 1, 2010

    Good story nice pics and I\’m loving that hobo idea

  • 7elewa on Dec 16, 2010

    Good story keep up the good work

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