The eyes say it all.

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“God, you’re pretty.”

The young Asian woman blushed, giggling as he took her hand. Her heart skipped a beat as he gazed at her, his blue eyes caressing every delicate feature, wanting to burn everything to memory. His eyes stopped at her lips, tracing the gentle curves of her mouth.

He suddenly pulled her close to him, her supple body pressing into his. She gives a little gasp as his lips brush against hers – a sweet, tender kiss. A hand strays to her hip as she touches his cheek. She smiles radiantly at him.

This was the first time they had ever met.

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  • vijayanths on Nov 16, 2010

    Nice share

  • Sourav on Nov 16, 2010

    ?

  • LoveDoctor on Nov 16, 2010

    Dark eyes are nicer in a guy. Lovely poem

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 16, 2010

    A very romantic piece. Nice work.

    Christine

  • meandu on Nov 16, 2010

    Great work! Leaves me wanting to read more.

  • Atanacio on Nov 16, 2010

    This was very Pretty, kind of liked it Sunshine

  • Shirley Shuler on Nov 16, 2010

    Hi Lady Sunshine, love at first sight, what a lovely piece.

  • Erin Miller on Feb 14, 2011

    Romantic sums this up nicely.

  • Erin Miller on Mar 10, 2011

    Oh whoops I already read this. lol

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