Little windows of observation…

I heard a buzzing sound coming from the bathroom,
So, of course, I had to check it out.
There, I saw a huge Fly, slamming into the mirror.
Over and over again, it crashed into the cold barrier.
Buzz…..Smack…..Repeat!
I thought to myself, “I feel like this sometimes…”
Always looking for an open window,
But finding my own reflection instead.
Discovering myself a little more each day,
Even through the teachings of a Fly.

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Comments (4)
  • yes me on Jul 21, 2011

    The widow of expectation… he he he I know its cheeky but I like it cheers Linda

  • Linda Lori on Jul 21, 2011

    Cheeky or not… your comments make me smile :) Have a great day!

  • Dennis N OBrien on Jul 21, 2011

    You’re a thinker and an observer Linda – most people would have just went – swat!

  • beingwell on Aug 8, 2011

    Nice one! Thanks!

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